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My SECOND attempt! Feedback!??
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| starsurfer |
OK, round 2! Thisis my second attempt at a sort of trance tune. Reminds me of Push's Strange World... but not as.. well.. professionally produced.
I know it seems a little lacking.. and the beats need fixing...
This is more uplifting than my last attempt... so I will class this as uplifting trance,
SONG: After the Night
ARTIST: Starsurfer
URL: http://www.pendarand.com/starsurfer...terthenight.mp3
Let me know what you think... also.. where can I download some better bass drums and drum kits for Reason 2?
Cheers
StarSurfer :) :) ;) |
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| Flotser |
HI there.....
It doesn't sounds so well...:rolleyes: ...
first of all the sound of the song is amaturish....
second there sure some stuff to fix
0:25... look how everything doesn't blend together...
and the strings in the background kinda annoying...do somthing about them, i guess also stop changing the main beat so often through the song....
but if its only your second track, dont worry and keep practicing
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| modular |
| learn some music keys and stick to them. your track is out of key and evil on the ear!!! sorry |
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| BayouRoach |
| For some reason, I actualy like the out of key sound. The song has potential. |
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| dEEkAy |
hehe...been listening to it....I kinda like the melody alot.
I'd like to remix it if you can send me the file as REASON or MIDI File. Depends on how u produced it.
Greets, Matthew |
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| starsurfer |
Hi Matthew,
thanks for listening to my song.
it was my 2nd attempt.. EVER hehe!
I can certainly email you the Reason 2 file.. it should only be small.... what is your email address?
My newest song is much better.... go to:
http://www.pendarand.com/starsurfer/songs/soniclove.mp3
the song is SONIC LOVE..
Anyways.. let me know your email. You can mail me at: [email protected]
I will send you the reason 2 file.. and let me know what you think of my new song!
Cheers
StarSurfer - Scottie :) :) ;) |
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