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Sample of my 2nd Production ! Feedback please
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| dEEkAy |
Hi everyone,
I'm just on the way to finish my second own production (after doing lots of remixes and stuff).
Check out a preview sample at http://users.pandora.be/chuanweb/music/sample.mp3
The full track will be available on my mp3.com site as soon as I finished it :)
I really need some opinions on this so feel free to post !!!
Regards, Matthew (dEEkAy) |
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| robstar |
Hi!
I*m just gonna write what comes to mind when I listen to your track
Didn't like the intro synth , it sounds too thin.
Nice kick!
Bass is also good, but try to create another bass pattern as I think it would make the track more interesting!
Too much reeverb on the clap.
New melody coming in...
Cool melody too, Like the sound of it!
Break...
Oh another new melody...also nice.
*phone rings*
lol
Okey, where was I...
The other melody comes in again , blends pretty well with the other melody.
U got some good melodys going on but the percussions are to weak, maybe u could ass a few hats or something.:)
And alter the bass pattern!
Keep it up! :) |
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| dEEkAy |
| hehe ok..I guess I will "ass" some few hats later today when I work a little more on it :D |
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| DJ Freestyle |
| You got yourself a very simple, but catchy melody! I listened to that middle esction & I don't think the piano fits... But keep workin' on it! I'd love to have a shot @ a remix of this track! :gsmile: |
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| BayouRoach |
| you have a good melody. |
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| Flotser |
yep,
Very cool melody!
but the piano dosent realy fit with the synth around 0:24... i guess..
:wtf:
but it seems you have some experience on piano? |
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| dEEkAy |
| quote: |
but it seems you have some experience on piano? |
well...it depends :p
basically seen I never took any lessons (well... I had 2 lessons with my sister's teacher just to see how it is and though I might have talent (at least thats what others say) I didnt do it). I randomly played some notes that fit, recorded that and reworked it a little in the computer.
The first melody I recorded sounded too much like "CARRERA 2" (Three Drives) and I wanted to avoid people shouting "ugh..you stole it from Three Drives" :p
Btw: I updated that sample a bit (changed some MASTERING Settings which lead to a better quality) and did a few minor changes on the Piano pattern. |
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