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[Progressive] - Gil Shwartz - The Dome General (Original Mix) - [Progressive]
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| Gil Shwarts |
Hiya mates
I'm currently in the process of producing a progressive tunes and i'm looking for those who know something about this kind of music to give me some pointers...
this version is the "full" one (9:25 minutes).
Gil_Shwartz_-_The_Dome_General_(Original_Mix).mp3
Awaiting comments, and open for suggestions...
Thanks, Gil Shwartz. |
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| DJ-Ande |
sounds well made, and sounds like anyother progressive tune, so thats good, but it wud sound better with some nice little synths, because is lacks sumthing
other than that its good:D :D |
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| Gil Shwarts |
| you mean melodies? |
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| dbl |
| sounds great gil... not really my kind of music ,but nice. |
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| Flotser |
I guess its a very cool progressive track...I think it flows great...
but maybe...
that Reverbed-ClosedHat-Like sound :p that enters at 0:36, is kinda getting annoying after some seconds....so maybe do something about it, I know you use it again afterwards, but than it fits better...
also that bass-like sound that enters near 5:45 ... maybe make it sound phatter...:nervous: ..
there were many cool parts in the track that i liked... also the ending is cool!
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| DJ-Ande |
| quote: | Originally posted by Gil Shwarts
you mean melodies? |
not a melody just some mor melodic, back round synths 2 make the track sound abit mor, well, happyer.
not really like a mail melody, just something 2 fill the time & make it abit more easy 2 listen 2:D :D |
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| Project T |
| have to say this is a pretty mint prog track, but i have to agree, its a bit too basic... i feel there should be deeper bass when there isn't and u need some more random samples like Beauty Never Fades has some kinda weird distorted vocal running through the track all the way, not the main vocal by Saffron, but that wierd kinda vocal sample, hope u know what I mean Gil, i think its an ace track with a lotta potential, just play with it and add some more random sounds. 1 more think, bugger u (hehehe ;)), i love the strange hatty noise @ 0:36 :p |
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| Gil Shwarts |
thanks guys i'll take it under consideration...
anyone else please? |
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