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Russian Trance.Part III
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| N_ka |
Hi to all! I asks you to listen and estimate my first euro-trance composition. To listen or download it you may here: www.mp3.com/N__ka
About song:
N. - "2The Other Side Of Life" /10:01min (radio edit - 5.27min)/128bps/9.18Mb (radio edit - 5Mb)
Vocals by "Lange". |
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| N_ka |
| Please, more feedbacks! |
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| oDrori |
Have a little patience ;)
I'm downloading now |
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| oDrori |
To start of with, I would ad a crash at the beginning of the track, so you give it the "Look out, it started" feel.
Don't like the sound of the synth @ 2:20
Way to go with the vox and the melody's fade in, smooth as , though the really low sounds create a disturbing sound.
The outro sounds a bit too shor tand the end sudden, I would add 8 bars to the outro.
Overall I'd say this deserves a some where between 7.5 - 8.5 outa 10 and also worth a thumbs up so:
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| Maaz |
KPYTO :D However, there are somethings that you could work on:
1) The FX you added to the vocals -> During the very first words (when she says "emotions touch"), I get quite annoyed because it sounds like a phone ringing and I have this urge of running to answer it :p
2) Add some more synth-lines before the build-up and after the melody stops... it's ok the way it is, but could be better if there were more layers during the non-melodic part :)
3) By the way, radio versions should be around 3-4 min. If you want more people to listen to your work, you could drop the beat from the beginning (and start from the build-up) and not loop the melody that much ;)
Way to go :D |
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