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[DD]New track: 3-F - Something Wrong
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| tu_face |
how do ppl :)
just finished my latest track.. its pumpin again, along similar lines to my remix of 'hello san francisco' but one i can put on my demo :)
bin doin a few new lil tricks in this aswell.. also the first time ive played vith a vocal sample (handily created with a steven hawkings type speech program :D
anyways, ill stop rambling and cut to the chase...
3-F - Something Wrong
let me know ur thoughts! ;) |
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| Fatboy |
I have to say that this is a great effort. A few comments though. I would've preffered a more aggressive, 'screaming' bass sound. This combined with a holden like low end would work great imo. I'm also a sucker for lots of percussion, so I think you could add some more of that to:p Great production though and nice to hear some fresh ideas in a tune:)
Peace |
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| modular |
| nice tune mate ...i like it...get it properly mastered and itll be large...nice to see some originality |
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| Flotser |
Good track! :wtf:
the melody is nice!
I guess it builds in a cool way, the intro until 1:22 is too long maybe.
the clap has a strange sound, like noise or something...
i would use onother clap
the synth at 5:00 is very cool , i love that sound :)
I like the track.
i guess it's just alittle empty, add some percusion (i'll never know how to spell it right :)), and some backround sounds, and you'll have a great super track !
have fun!! |
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| Spad |
fooking nice one! Definetly your best and most original yet. Bit at 7:18 is mint! Bassline sounds a bit Tomcraft inspired (not that that's a bad thing of course). Main melody & synth is just ed up....gets into your brain...very addictive (can't think of a better word). I don't think the intro's too long at all, the whole tune's got a great flow to it.
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| tu_face |
| quote: | Originally posted by Spad
Main melody & synth is just ed up....gets into your brain...very addictive |
hehe... would wrong be the word?? :)
cheers for the comments guys, shall take them into consideration :D
keep em coming! |
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| ferrycorstenfan |
| Nice work Jeff, original which makes a change with a lot of ppl, so keep up the good stuff :) |
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| Az |
classy mate, very classy
can't help thinking it should be a little more Marco V
harder beat perhaps??
and make more use of that dirty sound that comes in at 5:42 ;)
also that vocal sounds mint
it's just plain wrong
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| tu_face |
charz 4 the replies :) muchos apreciated..
funny u should say that about the marco v thing. i tested its mixing capabilities and it mixes very nicely into tolerance :D |
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| Az |
| quote: | Originally posted by tu_face
charz 4 the replies :) muchos apreciated..
funny u should say that about the marco v thing. i tested its mixing capabilities and it mixes very nicely into tolerance :D |
I was thinking maybe along the lines of this could be the next indicator with a bit of tweaking ;) |
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| Az |
| what speech program did you use? |
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| eLe_vatE |
| thats menacing! sounds really great, some of those bass changes remind me of a green martian track, effect at 4:13 is wicked, good job. |
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