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[UPDATE] !! Sample of a new trance production !!
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dEEkAy
Hi everyone,

I'm currently working on my 3rd track, but I still dunno if I should continue it.
Please give a comment on this "basic" shape of the track:
New Melody:
http://users.pandora.be/chuanweb/music/prodi05-02.mp3

thx, dEEk
Fatboy
Well, when the bass come in I can't help but to think of Paul van Dyk. Sounds very nice and clear though:) I'm not too sure about the melody. I'm sure it could work with more elements added to it, but as it stands now some of those chord changes are a bit to weird for me.

Peace
Flotser
VEry clear cool sound!
i also love the bass line

the melody... its starts dreamy,but then it kinda ... i dont know, the notes dont realy fit,

i guess you should tweak the melody, and its can be very cool!
tu_face
never ditch an idea :) just put it away for a while and come back to it later..

the melody is a bit familiar.. except for the last couple of phrases, that reaLLy need to change... they just dont fit im afraid :)

the bassline, its a bit boring for me :) but then again i dont like PvD's stuff (and its a similar bassline to the one hes been using for 10 years) so you can put that down to personal taste :)

very clean and crisp sounding synths, maybe a little too clean? again this could be personal taste :D

structurally the song is sound though :), it flows nicely up until the weird notes in the melody start to happen :)
dEEkAy
Okay...I did a rather big melody change :)

http://users.pandora.be/chuanweb/music/prodi05-02.mp3

get it now and keep on posting :D
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