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1)i loved the intro into the melody dude... very nice!!
2)and the melody... once full blown... is very pretty... good countermelody as well
3)lots of energy around the 3 min mark as well
4)around the 4:20-4:30 min mark, might be more colorful if you had some pads going in the background just to keep the song progressing
5)the very first melody is back again, and that is refreshing at the 5:30 mark
6)nice finish
I would suggest just adding a little more flavor or diversity to the mid section - it just drags out a little too long, but would sound killer if you filled with a new melodic line, or if you altered the melody somehow... would be sweet!
great job! sounds like lots of time went into it!
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