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projecct - 7th angel
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| dbl |
have made a new track and would love some comments on it to improve myself :)
HERE it is (rightclick/save as) |
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| Flotser |
Hello!!
I love the Begining, also love the bassline!! (is it ok to do the bass line on so high frequences?)
The percisuin is also great!!
The main synth 2:00... its cool, but i guess that darker synth would fit better in that dark track :)
2:40....you fade the synth to to low volume i guess
angain, overall, the track is great, but the main melody seems maybe simple, ant too happy...just an aprerigator playng some notes, but again, i think with darker synth it will sound better.
4:30 ... love that athmospere! |
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| dbl |
| quote: | Originally posted by Flotser
Hello!!
I love the Begining, also love the bassline!! (is it ok to do the bass line on so high frequences?)
The percisuin is also great!!
The main synth 2:00... its cool, but i guess that darker synth would fit better in that dark track :)
2:40....you fade the synth to to low volume i guess
angain, overall, the track is great, but the main melody seems maybe simple, ant too happy...just an aprerigator playng some notes, but again, i think with darker synth it will sound better.
4:30 ... love that athmospere! |
thank's.. i was thinking about the bass too, but i hope it's ok :)
will fix the fading later today.. thank's for the tip.
the melodie might seem a bit simple, but that was the best i could come up with atm.. i have no inspiration at all when it comes to melodies... might just have a bad time atm :(
and it's not an aprerigator (or how it is spelt).. i have done the notes myself...
thank's for the comments.. much appreciated :) |
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| dbl |
| anyone more??? 30 looks 1 post :( |
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| Lightworks |
Downloading it now mate, but the server it very slow... :(
I'll be back once I have it, I promise ;)
Greetz,
Wim/LW
Edit : finally I got it ;)
I really liked the intro and fx you used, they're nice. Basslines fits well too. Good atmosphere that builds. But I don't really like its melody... sorry :(
All the rest is very fine, only the melody could be more interesting, or some twists to it perhaps.
Keep up the good work! |
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| dbl |
| quote: | Originally posted by Lightworks
Downloading it now mate, but the server it very slow... :(
I'll be back once I have it, I promise ;)
Greetz,
Wim/LW
Edit : finally I got it ;)
I really liked the intro and fx you used, they're nice. Basslines fits well too. Good atmosphere that builds. But I don't really like its melody... sorry :(
All the rest is very fine, only the melody could be more interesting, or some twists to it perhaps.
Keep up the good work! |
thank's alot wim....
i have a serious problem with melodies atm.. no inspiration at all :(
i tryied to do something more with it, but everything just went straight to hell so i keept it like that... might redo it someday with a better melodie.. if i get some inspiration that is ;)
but i'm glad you liked the rest :) |
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