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My second track
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| Mane |
Hello
Here you are link to my second track, please write your opinion!
Mane - Dreaming (Original Short Mix)
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Thx Flotser for your opinion, yes you have right something is wrong with it I don't check it after when I upload it because I thought everythink is good but it's not good :conf:
I upload this song once again and then I give link |
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| Mane |
| any opinions?? plz write something about it! |
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| Flotser |
Hello!
i know people here are not that nice about newbies.... sorry i didnt post a comment yet myself, i was realy busy lately...
;)
First of all, it was annoying listening to it, cause it sounds very vary wierd, like you recorded it live, while it was playing or something!!? the pitch changes all the time, and sometimes bad sounds pop up, like when there is no CPU left... :conf: i guess its not your production's fault, so please fix it. or maybe its Flashgets's false, but it never happend before.
but if i try to avoid this, The sounds you are using are great in my opinion, sounds Techno to me :)
i also cant hear a bassline there... i guess i'm wrong though.
also the construction of the track is good in my opinion, also after 3 minutes where the cool dreamy pad comes in.
please fix the mp3... and people will be able to give you better comments. |
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