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| cyrus2k2 |
please take a listen to my newest track in-the-making. it's an early version but i think i'll stay with the melody. any comments or suggestions?
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-Cyrus |
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| Flotser |
WOW!!! :eyes: :eyes:
very very melodic!!!
you are so talanted man!!!!!!!
i guess you are learing an instrument for long time now !! right?? :p
only one thing, the kick at 0:30 is too hard, make it much softer in my opinion to fit it in your track!!
good luck with this one!! |
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| cyrus2k2 |
ok, thanks for your tip. i guess i have to check the volume settings once more. perhaps i should change the kick sample. it's a very punchy one with a lot of attack.
i'd like to hear some other comments...
cheers |
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| eLe_vatE |
| really nice bass, youve given it a great atmosphere with the pads, have to agree with Flotser on the kick, doesnt suit the track, but sounds nice look forward to the complete version.... |
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| mantisnl |
wow, very nice man, i like that guitar-thing! but the kick is 2 hard..
looking forward 2 hearing the full track;) |
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| cyrus2k2 |
| is it the sample itself that doesn't fit into the track? or is it just it's volume? |
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| HalluciNation |
that beat is just too hard for the track- takes away from the amazing beauty of the melody. I would use a softer drum with more resonance, the one you have now is kind of a hard-trance/hardcore sample.
Man, i would love to do a re-groove of this track- turn it into a housier peice of music. If you're interested, PM me or sumthin
Lastly, what things do you use to produce, software/hardware wise? |
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| Az |
| I'm gonna go against everyone here, I don't think the beat is too heavy at all, i just doesn't sound right, an even harder beat would probably be better, but it needs a few percussive effects in there as well. Melody is really nice as well :) |
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| DJ Freestyle |
| Amazing track! I don't think the kick needs to be softer but it sounds like one of those old school Juno Reactor / Goa kicks. Make it more compressed or somethin'... Whatever you gotta do. |
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