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Lakeus- When the Sky Breaks ( finished at last )
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| Flotser |
Very cool!
i would describe it more uplifting..not realy progressive :)
anyway, realy good flow of the track, cool melodies that fit in the overall atmospere blabla :)
nice spacy FX
also , the main synths are too high (volume & pitch i guess) ....
great stuff :p |
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| tu_face |
this is a really nice sounding track, but there are a few things that could get sorted out to make it better :)
the whole thing needs to be slower, im playing it at -3 now and it sounds about right :)
if you are going for the progressive sound, u need to work on your drums more, the samples you are using are very ferry corstenesque, which goes for most of trance.. so try and make ur beat sound a lil diff with a few more unique samples/flashy fx hooks.
as flotster said, the high pitched lead synth tends to drown out the rest, so maybe turn the treble down a bit on the lead synth and turn the volume of your beat/perc up to sort out that problem :)
when that first breakdown crashes in, use something else over the cymbal for added whoosh effect cus the cymbal on its own doesnt quite carry it :)
it all seems a little busy at times too.. try swapping the melodies about instead of playing lots at once so that the lister doesnt get too lost :)
the main melody is really good, very unique. also when that first chord change comes in.. oo lala :D work hard on this and it will come out a stonkin good tune! ;) |
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| smallSHEEP |
| really nice!!:eyespop: |
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| Lakeus |
Thanks for the comments, appreciate them!
And tu_face thanks especially for your detailed comments, I`m not going necessarily for the progressive sound, I wasn´t just sure how to categorize this track...
Best regards, Lakeus
http://iuma.lakeus.com |
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| Lakeus |
Does anybody else have any comments?
Thanks, Lakeus |
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