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BBE - Seven Days & One Week (Gil Schwartz Mix)
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Gil Shwarts
Hiya
take a listen to this tune... i'm sure that there are some things to add/change/fix
but i'm not sure what...
be kind and tell me :)


BBE_-_Seven_Days_And_One_Week-Gil_Schwartz_Mix.mp3


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DJ_FRAZ
im liking the sound of this....

the beat sounds kinda speed garagey. lol
Vortex_SA
sounds like lots of samples... that stop after the mix time can be better if ull make it more obvious, the master on the track is waaay to trebley :) sounds quite simple actually, stereo games will be great for this, and maybe fatter sounds with proper equing.. it sounds nice though :) id love to hear the final edit of this...
DJ-Kreing^^
I donno, it just sounds to simple, other then that there are acouple of issues u need to take care about.
First the percussion, way to load, and very simple and anoying after a while, in fact the whole percussion stays the same from the beggining of the tune to the end. Try using softer anf more veriable samples.

0:27, There comes a string/choir which goes on until about 2:15, i really dont like the sound of it, way to amaturish and simple, like a flat sound, dont like it.

The build up is also very simple just thoes snares and the stabs which i find pretty (לא קשורים לכל הקטע).

Anyways gil, i excpect more of you, for the past few months you were releasing new stuff each week, or even in shorter periods of time.
Maybe you should try putting more work in every work you come up with, im sure that if youll put more work in your tunes they will sound alot nicer.

Good luck...
Gil Shwarts
10x for the comment kreing...
but the tune isn't finished yet :)

just made something and uploaded it... i'm working on a more important project at the moment and these comes in the middle :)
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