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TOTAs: help me out :D
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| Mosaic |
as you guys may or may not know, I've gotten into producing a bit of trance over the last year. Only the last month or so have I been making decent stuff, and I am hoping to release some stuff now that I've got some more free time than usual.
LeMay - Elixir (Exclusive TOTA Sample)
Right Click > Save As
its in ogg format
I got started on this track yesterday, and just finished up another 2 hours of work. Probably the nicest track I've created, and now I'm looking for feedback :D
Please be honest, and let me know what you think of this sample. I can take criticism as long as its constructive.
I would post in the production forums, but its hard to get feedback there. |
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| DJ El Kay Dee |
| omg..i havent downloaded yet..but THANKGOD SOME PEOPLE KNOW THT OGG VORBIS EXISTS |
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| Tudo Beleza |
| I downloaded it, first opinon was it was pretty good, i liked it, hehe kinda short, but good, i will give more feed back tommrow, i am dead tired tonite, but good job. |
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| Mosaic |
| quote: | Originally posted by Tudo Beleza
I downloaded it, first opinon was it was pretty good, i liked it, hehe kinda short, but good, i will give more feed back tommrow, i am dead tired tonite, but good job. |
well duh its short... its a SAMPLE :P |
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| Tudo Beleza |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mosaic
well duh its short... its a SAMPLE :P |
hehe i am so tired, i can not read english, i am amazed i can write english at this moment.
so i should have said, nice SAMPLE, can not wait till it is a TRACK:D |
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| Mosaic |
| quote: | Originally posted by Tudo Beleza
hehe i am so tired, i can not read english, i am amazed i can write english at this moment.
so i should have said, nice SAMPLE, can not wait till it is a TRACK:D |
heheheh :D thx |
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| Elmo-On-XTC |
ok I listened to it a couple times...I think it's a very good sample. It has many of the elements that make a good trance track. My advice (just advice get a couple more opinions before you do this maybe), the main riff that comes in at like 6 seconds, I think it should exit at about 54 seconds, and not re-enter till the buildup at around 2:17 again. It get a little repetative how that riff is structed right now.
Still it's better than anything I've produced :p I've been fooling around with fruity for a couple weeks, I use samples though, which I kinda wanna stop doing, but anyways awseme track! I really like the brakedown & buildup! |
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| Mosaic |
| quote: | Originally posted by Elmo-On-XTC
ok I listened to it a couple times...I think it's a very good sample. It has many of the elements that make a good trance track. My advice (just advice get a couple more opinions before you do this maybe), the main riff that comes in at like 6 seconds, I think it should exit at about 54 seconds, and not re-enter till the buildup at around 2:17 again. It get a little repetative how that riff is structed right now.
Still it's better than anything I've produced :p I've been fooling around with fruity for a couple weeks, I use samples though, which I kinda wanna stop doing, but anyways awseme track! I really like the brakedown & buildup! |
okay cool, I'll try some of your ideas.
that crystal/digital riff you are referring to is the latest addition to the track, so I haven't experimented with it a whole lot. I love the way it sounds with the lead synth during the chorus... but not as much during the intro. |
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| kwongandy |
| the main riff sounds too acidic for the track, i think it should be softer. as it repeats, it dominates your melody a bit. other than that, it's structured pretty well. |
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| TheNeonAlien |
| what app opens oog files? |
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| infinity HiGH |
| quote: | Originally posted by DJ El Kay Dee
omg..i havent downloaded yet..but THANKGOD SOME PEOPLE KNOW THT OGG VORBIS EXISTS |
i know what ogg vorbis is :-| |
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| TheNeonAlien |
Mosaic ,
send a link to download this app plz
Thanx :D :D :D |
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