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On My Way - new tune
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| Lightworks |
Hey peepz,
I've posted this one a while ago on my site. You can download it here :
http://www.lightworks.tk -> music -> lightworks
The track is called 'On My Way', somewhat different from what I've done before, this time the main focus is on progression in the track, the way it evolves. Please let me know what you think of it ;)
Cheers,
Wim/LW |
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I'm downloading it right now, will give feedback in some minutes :)
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Just started listening to it. My first impression is that the sound quality is pretty nice. The string which comes in at 0:28 sounds a bit thin to me. Nice percussions coming in now. The lead comes slowly in at 0:55 and builds up till 2:33. Nice..
The break is very chilling, I like it. Good you put better strings in the break, just like you could read my mind before I posted this.
Piano work suits very well along with the melody. The main lead is powerful! :)
Nice track you got here mate, keep up the good work!
I give it a 8/10. |
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| Lightworks |
thx for your opinion mate, i appreciate it ;)
cheers!
Wim |
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| Haak |
| uplifting stuff as always (will you ever try something different? ;)), it's nice, good work on the synths :) percussion is pretty good too. maybe it's just me, but I feel that "Rim shot" is getting abit old hehe. overall, a good track, the ending is not very dj friendly though :) |
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| Lightworks |
Thx for the comment Haak ;)
I'm trying to get more vareity in the uplifting style I make. For example I think this is totally different from tunes like Forever or Skyscape. I didn't see Airbase or so do this yet ;)
Don't know which 'rimshot' you mean though? I thought it was a bit muffled in the background to 'fill things up' a bit more. Let the dj's be a bit more creative then instead of mixing straight on each time hehe ;) If any dj will ever play it that is.
Thx for your input mate,
LW |
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| Lightworks |
| quote: | Originally posted by dbl
sounds nice wim :) |
thx mate ;) |
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| Rialdo |
i´m listiening right now,,
i like it,, its very nice to me. good job man |
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| Lightworks |
Thx Rialdo ;)
Cheers,
LW |
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| Lightworks |
| anyone else wanna have a listen? |
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| Project T |
| quote: | Originally posted by Lightworks
Let the dj's be a bit more creative then instead of mixing straight on each time hehe ;) If any dj will ever play it that is. |
Wim, I ain't downloaded yet, but I have to agree with Haak, not on this, but other tunes of yours, especially the Infinite Streams tunes are somewhat impossible to mix to any decent quality. If you want your tracks to get played by the top DJs you've gotta give them a helping hand not tell them to feck off ;) sorry if that's a bit harsh, just gotta prepare you for the real criticism for when I download it :p |
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| Project T |
im impressed as usual, very nice clean sounding production, but here are the things i would change:
don't have a 2nd break, and just finish the melodies at 6:15 and take the percussion out slowly
remove/replace the shakers/rimshots (woodknock things) because i don't think there isn't a track u don't hav em in lol
nice new pads btw :) good use of piano aswell
lastly, the synths could be a bit louder and deerper/more powerful coz they seem to be drowned out a bit on anything other than compputer speakers...
hope i helped :) |
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