| Eugene |
DeeKay, aber hallo!
First of all: Very nice tune. I like the little "synth-cascades", and the piano sounds very good.
One suggestion: The piano melody is a little strange. I don't know how to describe it musically (in terms of notes), but the chord progression goes like this:
-_- ... (the 3rd chord is the same as the 1st)
It would be more interesting, and memorable, if the 3rd chord was something different. And then you could develop the complete melody from there.
Also, why is there only a kick? Don't you need some claps/snares to go with it?
keep up the good work |
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