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DJ Tiesto - Lethal Industry (Aerodynamics Remix)
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PaRaNoIk0
my first remix.. techy with influences from Marco V, Katana and M.I.K.E., I'd like some comments and critics please :D

http://www.iuma.com/IUMA/Bands/Aerodynamics/

download 192 kbps, hi-fi winamp stream and lo-fi real audio stream available.
Gil Shwarts
very nice... i like it
although, the melody isn't clear enough and the melody is the whole point of that tune :)

nice production
keep it up
Vortex_SA
u need alot more sound work... the melody is not built in the pattern of the original, and its kinda not matching the beat... the high string can sound better, put eq on it, i miss a bass part that runs on the beat... sounds very minimal...
PaRaNoIk0
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Originally posted by Gil Shwarts
very nice... i like it
although, the melody isn't clear enough and the melody is the whole point of that tune :)


never thought of that really.. you do got a point there. but it was made to be this way, with the dirty synth :)

quote:
nice production
keep it up


thanks :cool:

quote:
Originally posted by Vortex_SA

u need alot more sound work... the melody is not built in the pattern of the original, and its kinda not matching the beat... the high string can sound better, put eq on it, i miss a bass part that runs on the beat... sounds very minimal...


hmm, weird, the melody i changed one or two notes exactly because they sounded bad along with the beat, lol. the bass and strings i know they suck, thats two of my weakest points. but anyway thanks for the feedback, that was useful :)
DJPrototypeX
sorry for the bringin up of an old thread, but this is a pretty good rmx. i really enjoyed it although the melody is a bit rough at times...would really love to see an update on this one with a sharper melody...good job:D:D:D
DJ NGE
the ideas are nice but you alltogether it sounds a bit boring... try adding a bit more hi hat and add a snare! the offbeat is also a bit weak ;)

but keep on trying! :)
PaRaNoIk0
thanx again for all the feedback, i actually was working on a updated version but seems like it'll never be finished
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