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Al Azar - Different Faces (Original Mix)
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| Mr.Mystery |
Mr.Mystery & MaRt present:
Al Azar - Different Faces
Mp3 (13,1Mb)
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New project bringing uplifting and energetic trance to you.
Server speeds shouldn't be a problem this time either.
Let us know what you think :) |
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| DJ Tranz |
| Very nice epic trancer. Full of energy and excellent melodic synths, not overdone build-up/up-lift.And I loved the trance break beats thrown in right before break-down Excellent. Better keep my glowstix close to me, lol!!! Let me know when it gets pressed on vinyl, would definately like to have a record like this in my bag. Thanks... Daniel... |
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| Lightworks |
It sounds ok to me, but not really your best I think... The synth sounds are ok, but try some different sounding synths too, most of them have nearly the same sound to them. The buildup melody reappears too often I think, it became kind of monotonous after a while. Although not being bad at all, just a bit overused maybe.
Take care ;)
LW |
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| Eugene |
From the technical and aesthetic point of view it's excellent.
But the melody needs some work.
For some reason it lacks a "resolution", if you know what I mean.
If you could resolve it to the main chord somehow, that would provide some aesthetic "closure" :)
hard to explain
I agree with Lightworks, the synth-pattern you have is repeated too often. You can fix that by introducing a completely different synth sound, with a different pattern.
Overall, good work though. |
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| dbl |
| sounds great, but i'm with lightworks on the melodie |
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| S2K |
Very solid production, excellent synth work!
My only criticism is the main melody, which is slightly repetitive and could be improved.
Good stuff! |
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| Mr.Mystery |
Thanks for listening, people.
So you think the main melody should have more variation or should I put in a new secondary synth altogether?
Because in the second part there actually are two additional synths - the other may have gotten too silent so it might not be that clear...
| quote: | For some reason it lacks a "resolution", if you know what I mean.
If you could resolve it to the main chord somehow, that would provide some aesthetic "closure"
hard to explain |
Okay... to be honest, I have no idea what you mean here... lol |
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| Lightworks |
I would use the same melody, but a different pattern to play it as a main melody. The building up is nice enough, but it's best to make another melody for after the climax I think, not just the same one over again ;)
But who am I to criticise, still it's your ideas mate ;)
Cheers,
Wim |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| The reason I was asking was that I was actually thinking of the very same thing myself, but then I decided to go with the current version instead... |
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| Arsalan |
| quote: | Originally posted by Lightworks
I would use the same melody, but a different pattern to play it as a main melody. The building up is nice enough, but it's best to make another melody for after the climax I think, not just the same one over again ;)
But who am I to criticise, still it's your ideas mate ;)
Cheers,
Wim |
yeah i agree maybe and adding a second synth after the build-up would be a great idea and a lot of energy to it because it kinda sounds like it's missing something but i love the track overall love the little breakbeat. |
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| DJPrototypeX |
| this is not my style...too happy...lol...but soudns great to me if u kno wha i mean...lol...melody needs a bit of tweakin though IMO... |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| quote: | Originally posted by DJPrototypeX
this is not my style...too happy...lol.. |
I'm glad you didn't hear the first version then ;) :stongue: |
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