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Halcyon - Moonless Spectres (my first track)
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| DJ F0cus |
Hey fellow people
Here's my first finished track, electro/house style.
I decided to concentrate on producing a few months ago.. the s/w used during the production of this track is Reason 2 and Sound Forge 6.
I welcome any suggestions and replies :)
(The final mastering hasn't been done yet, so don't bother commenting about it)
DD:
Halcyon - Moonless Spectres
Alex. |
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| Endre |
i'll give it a listen because your name is Alex, and mine is too.
peace bro.
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| DJ F0cus |
C'mon.. :(
i really need your opinions and tips for improving |
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| extalin |
well. the quality is really good except there is too much reverb on some of the synths, especially the loud bassy synth that comes in later in the song. id turn that one down some. i like the musical content and the sounds you use though.
the problems i have with it are that you loop the same synth melody over and over for the first few minutes and its a little too drawn out at 11:42. that is a really really long track.
the reverb on the drums is good. the atmospheric sounds are really cool too.
to make it better, id rearrange it to be shorter by introducing new things and taking things out more quickly and writing some more melodies.
keep up the good work though. |
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