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More Critisism Please!
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| Yevat |
| HELLO!! ive been workin on a song for 2 weeks now..... and guess what?? ive came to bug u again! lol! i want critisism again!! ill keep askin for critisism until i improve on what ever i need to improve on so i cant get anymore critisism!! HA!... ok, that made no sense.. oh well... here is da clip |
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| Utopia1278 |
| too fast for my liking..ask someone thats into the harder stuff! ill give it a 5 |
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| dvd |
| Critisism u want huh?.. u suck1!!!! heheh j/k |
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| Utopia1278 |
| damm he told you! maybe you should do what he does and stick with dvd's!!! |
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| TRANCIN4EVA |
| The main keyboard sound and rhythm (1,2,3,...1,2,3) is boring and monotonous. I like the break and the BPM though, good work. Spice that keyboard up a bit with a cleaner, aural (rise and fall) sound. Try that for now...if you want more criticism...I'll be here.:D |
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| Utopia1278 |
| yeah spread that beat out a little bit! |
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| Yevat |
| hi, thanx! ok then! i shall try and do that |
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| DjTS-NeXiLe |
man !!!!!! nice synths. I aint got no problem with the speed. Very nice... and after it goes all mellow with the sysnth..... u really need to build it up progressively till theres a climax....... then this could KICK total ass
good luck :) |
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| Yevat |
| hey thanx! well right now im actually workin on that bit.. im gonna put some crap int background that has a slow filter sweep to it...hopefully that will work |
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| DjTS-NeXiLe |
| good luck with it :-) |
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| Paul Wilson |
| Sounds like Happy Hardcore to me! |
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| Yevat |
| hello! here is what it sounds like so far... the new version: |
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