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Yevat
HELLO!! ive been workin on a song for 2 weeks now..... and guess what?? ive came to bug u again! lol! i want critisism again!! ill keep askin for critisism until i improve on what ever i need to improve on so i cant get anymore critisism!! HA!... ok, that made no sense.. oh well... here is da clip
Utopia1278
too fast for my liking..ask someone thats into the harder stuff! ill give it a 5
dvd
Critisism u want huh?.. u suck1!!!! heheh j/k
Utopia1278
damm he told you! maybe you should do what he does and stick with dvd's!!!
TRANCIN4EVA
The main keyboard sound and rhythm (1,2,3,...1,2,3) is boring and monotonous. I like the break and the BPM though, good work. Spice that keyboard up a bit with a cleaner, aural (rise and fall) sound. Try that for now...if you want more criticism...I'll be here.:D
Utopia1278
yeah spread that beat out a little bit!
Yevat
hi, thanx! ok then! i shall try and do that
DjTS-NeXiLe
man !!!!!! nice synths. I aint got no problem with the speed. Very nice... and after it goes all mellow with the sysnth..... u really need to build it up progressively till theres a climax....... then this could KICK total ass

good luck :)
Yevat
hey thanx! well right now im actually workin on that bit.. im gonna put some crap int background that has a slow filter sweep to it...hopefully that will work
DjTS-NeXiLe
good luck with it :-)

Paul Wilson
Sounds like Happy Hardcore to me!
Yevat
hello! here is what it sounds like so far... the new version:
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