http://www.dance-industries.com/track.asp?track_id=3835

please download and tell me what you think

thanks

very nice!!!
éôä àçé àçã äèåáéí ùìê çççç

Comments as i listen.
Kick sounds distorted, more compressing will help fixing that. The bass is abit simple, but it sounds pretty good.
The percussion is really to simple, add some more drum elements to make if fuller also there is to much reverb in there, maybe its the clap.
The pluck synth comes in to suddenly...
Nice synth at the break, 1:26 - when the kick comes in it really sounds like an empty spot, not enough elements and sounds.
At about 2:00 the main synth is playing along with a high pad, sounds weird at times, but gives it a good twist.

I loved how the pluck synth sound at the second break.

Overall the tune is nice, abit simple sounding at certain points but still nice

___________________

"The world is not beautiful. And that, in a way, lends it a sort of beauty."

--=My Music=--

thanks

I agree. I think that there has to be more perc to fatten the mix. Other than that... Nice variation of melody. Sounds a little too Euro-pop for my personal taste (ie heavy use of portmento on the lead. Doesnt sound bad, but creates a Europop feel imo) Well done. Sounds clean.

___________________

MySpace
E-Mail

Nice Work man.. euro pop indeed but its great.. i like!

___________________

thank you for your comments