As some of you know i started doing production in august of last year.... And this is my latest offering i need to do more sound design to fill up the tune but this is 2min worth... Im using vocal samples from a dfuse tune, which the name escapes me atm....

http://www.frozen-web.com/samples/xpanded.mp3

be as harsh as you want just dont be a dick about it lol....

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the hell happened to MY song??

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Originally posted by Highmay the hell happened to MY song??

well i got a new synth... And my lyric writing skills are utter shit as is all my english ability...... And i got inspired to do this instead... Sorry highmay you will have to live with just pictures from a silly cromagnon man such as myself.


Me smash highshit....

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use a better kick sample it sounds so muddy here, work on adding more percussion and effects maybe add a pad or some atmospheric stuff, its too minimal right now. The structure of the hihats are sloppy for some reason it sounds wrong. Otherwise good work, keep working at it. I like the vocals , is there any cahnce u can send it to me ?

peace,

Jay

Thats decent, good job

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it's ok, not really my kind of music
I need a longer sample to judge

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Originally posted by fr0st well i got a new synth... And my lyric writing skills are utter shit as is all my english ability...... And i got inspired to do this instead... Sorry highmay you will have to live with just pictures from a silly cromagnon man such as myself. Me smash highshit....

pathetic...guess you just dont have heart...

Unfortunately, I don't know TOO many technical terms so my advice can help to an extent.

Vocals are great. The drumbeat that comes in around the :30 mark sounds great during the vocal part and during the short intervals between the vocals... but when there is a prolonged time between the vocals, such as at 1:30, it gets a bit annoying.

Otherwise, it's definitely a great start for a potentially awesome tune.

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Originally posted by beema I need a longer sample to judge

ditto

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Only thing I can say is, it's too repetitive. Don't know how else to put it.

its nice, but liven it up a little bit...have some chick in the background orgasming...that'll get peoples' attentions...

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Originally posted by Highmay its nice, but liven it up a little bit...have some chick in the background orgasming...that'll get peoples' attentions...

done by axl rose.