any thoughts would be apreciated

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getting no response is worse than getting flamed, IMO.

the backing that comes in @ 0:31 needs some work. maybe shorten up the whole mix a little. im not a big fan of choir patches.

always i can "hear" new melodies and what it could aound like. this song can sound alot better imo

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Last edited by jacheatamobits on Mar-30-2006 at 18:44

Alrite covert, I said I'd review your track.

I like the bass it's nice and deep. What are you using by the way? Rekon you could thinkin up the lead synths, fatter would fill the space a bit more. Try zeta or vanguard, some of the presets on them would do it. Rekon the drums could do with some work to, like the snare, run it through a distortion box, if your using reason use scream, if it's floops use blood overdrive. Don't know whether your into that kind of sound but it's a trick i use for my productions. For the hats if you can't be bothered programming use a loop, depends what kit your using then i'll give you some advice. Like the melodies though! Keep it up.

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thanks for the review guys will take your thoughts into concideration thanks....

Hi m8 .
the first thing i noticed was the 1960s kidna alien movie sounds =) cool but could be done better , try fix something that makes me intrested for the rest of the tune. and just as jacheatamobits wrote the part that kicks in @ 31 is veeeryy empty and so is the rest. The base line is ok could be better try adding one more baseline whit a humping melody perhaps. and for godssake wher´s the fxs?? the melody is good but still very repetetive and empty ,you need to create more energy ,more space , and more variations to the tune. and try adding something catchy so peapole remember the tune. Sorry if im whining, but you wanted to improve the tune and thats my first toughts of what I would do.

use this list.
More perc and tribals
more pads
one more baseline
fxs
a catchy main melody

the rest will fall in naturaly.

Improvise experiment and give the tune a few more studio Hours. And your done =) keep it up // Mavvea

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Hey! Takkra catch this link then m8 imo!

I think it could work so you can also give a rewiev on this.

http://s54.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...20S053W9SU8S05.


Good luck then!



Snowave

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Originally posted by covert23 hello everyone heres another track ive done this week would love some feedback....whats good whats not ... thats how we learn and the more ears that give comments the better the link below downloads file if you have problems ..copy and past link into new browser that should do it ....all the best and thanks for the review...... link.... [[ LINK REMOVED ]] thanks michael......

Hi Cover! I will give you feedback! I like track because it has alot potental! But i will aggree with the producers above that the song need tha be adjusted. I hope i take this as positive information and advise from me. I will feedback tonight with details.


Cheers Snowave

Hi m8, thanx for your feedback. About this tune though. I was half expecting to hear Charlotte Church start singing in this. It sound very like the tune she done with Jurgen. I like th overall production on this. The kick is very nice and punchy and some of the melody's ar amazing. I would imo change that high lead sound or mabey give it some reverb. Overall though very melodic commercial sounding track and good work

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Originally posted by Snowave Hi Cover! I will give you feedback! I like track because it has alot potental! But i will aggree with the producers above that the song need tha be adjusted. I hope i take this as positive information and advise from me. I will feedback tonight with details. Cheers Snowave

Hi i'm back. and i have analyzed your track. And have added my coments. use more like guidelines and not as critic. I ve been producing since year 1994 and still not complete yet. The ufo alien landing sound fx need delay and reverb or something likely. the bass is good but needs another bass on the bass mayby if you add a short key low on as the bass to make it more effectfull. The key needs cut off filter low cut filter tune upp in the beginning but remember even in witch pogram you will ever use the cut filter so remeber to use the filter always above the reverb and delay because if you the cut off filter is as last or lowestranking on the effects it will sound bad. excep if its a dry track without reverb or delay required then you can make very sound on that. the chorus pad with sounds of amiga or commandore 64 i recommend that you add 1 more pad and put 1 octave lower and put it swirling in panomatic right to left. in 6 minutes in the track when you comes to bassdrum rolling then i heard that you useed the volume thats good but try also to use low cut filter comming there and res to the make it complete somehow togheter makes a balance. The piano shuld also have som kind of delay at least. I love the track. and keep the good work. I wont do very detailed rewievs normally. I hope this will be a guidline on it's way. a track takes more time to do if you want it really detailed. btw a crash shoud come in 6.13minutes in the track.

It's your choice you dont need to read everything. But it 's more for advice.

Good luck!

Cheers Snowave!

thanks guys will take all points into concideration......