I'd love to hear this progress more before the Pads start coming in (Which are nice, by the way). The drums sit nicely, but I think you should add more to spice things up a little.

The pluck that arrives in the breakdown is nice. It would be nice to hear it with more "sparkle".

Probably the best track I've heard from you. Good job.

Solid track

Maybe try copying the main synth riff a few times and swapping the main patch for another synth/sound on each copied channel and bring those in and out as the tune progresses.

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I like your melodic ideas and it is a nice track but I bet you could get more volume out of it even just whack it through ozone quickly would spice it up, or an exiter or something?

That said I do like the way the mix sits quite a chilled vibe for you though im used to hands up arps and things from you lol.

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Originally posted by Sonic_c I like your melodic ideas and it is a nice track but I bet you could get more volume out of it even just whack it through ozone quickly would spice it up, or an exiter or something? That said I do like the way the mix sits quite a chilled vibe for you though im used to hands up arps and things from you lol.

I know what you mean , this is straight from render and ive no idea yet on how to get things louder.

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 I will be on it in a few min (got to go to the meeting). cheers

No probs , look forward to your feedback.

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Has a lot of good staff in it and I'm trying to break it down melodically and composition wise, so bear with me.

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Nice, clean, solid and stable sound - this is my first impression. So many things I like in this track and still doesn’t generate the whoooow factor. Sorry man, don’t get me wrong, I like the overall concept, instruments sound selection is good, composition site is solid and melodically hmmmm…., I think that’s where the improvement could be. You have a lot of open space in your song for nice either arp or great sounding FX and sweep it throughout your melody. Good arp will have the same effect and will spice up this great atmosphere you have going on in your song. Drums and bass is driving this well composed rhythm very aggressively and your primary goal should be to add some massively sounding instrument or FX, is like adding soul to our body. If you want to catch as many people interest as you can and want them to enjoy your track the same time, then you have to create some beautiful melody or sound which will stick in their heads – in my opinion.

This is definitely nice sounding track and by spending more time working on this song, you might create a winner man.

Cheers from Seattle.

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Nice, clean, solid and stable sound - this is my first impression. So many things I like in this track and still doesn’t generate the whoooow factor. Sorry man, don’t get me wrong, I like the overall concept, instruments sound selection is good, composition site is solid and melodically hmmmm…., I think that’s where the improvement could be. You have a lot of open space in your song for nice either arp or great sounding FX and sweep it throughout your melody. Good arp will have the same effect and will spice up this great atmosphere you have going on in your song. Drums and bass is driving this well composed rhythm very aggressively and your primary goal should be to add some massively sounding instrument or FX, is like adding soul to our body. If you want to catch as many people interest as you can and want them to enjoy your track the same time, then you have to create some beautiful melody or sound which will stick in their heads – in my opinion. This is definitely nice sounding track and by spending more time working on this song, you might create a winner man. Cheers from Seattle.

Thanx man!
good feedback.

I forgot to mention that i was messing around with the melody and sounds for a couple of weeks , and the whole tune i slapped together in a couple of hours.
But i do know what you mean about thaty empty space , and i hope to revist the track soon.

cheers man.

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