Almost finished with my favorite song yet, probably the best trance song I've ever done, however, i'm not sure if I'll make it the final draft.

Really interested in hearing some constructive criticism and positive feedback from you guys, I really think you're going to like this song.

The song is the first one in the player - http://www.myspace.com/t0xicshockflp

Please check it out!

Much thanks,

-Torus

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Listening in,

- Melody's are OK, but the sound quality on Myspace is horrid, use soundcloud or upload vie speedyshare

- The kick is a audible, but not strong enough IMO, use a different sample

- I don't know if its the myspace or just the track but the mixdown sounds really bad. Fix on making all the elements fit together and have the sounds you want to stand out.

Fix all that and you would have a decent track, nothing out of the ordinary though

Hey the kick samples are something I've wanted to touch on, I have very few trance kick samples, I have too many DnB / Breakbeat bass drums, but those don't seem to fit well.

Care to refer me?

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check my stuff out!

I just use the Vengeance essential club sounds 3 trance kicks, really powerful

The track's not bad, but it sounds like the melody was lifted from Labworks - Ibiza Sunrise, though it may be just a coincidence