I'm downloading now, I'll post a comment when I've heard it, until then I'll just keep the thread at the top with this

Come on guys, this is the third time i have uploaded a track i have made and nobody has given feedback.

Transa it doesn't work m8, ive tried uncooking it but that doesnt even work,

Please fix it!

What do you mean when u say it's not workin?
Are you renaming the file and putting .mp3 at the end instead of .txt?

What exactly is wrong?

it sounds completely fucked, i remamed it to mp3, when i play it in windows media player its all fucked and sounds screatchy and blippy, sounds like its been cooked. i loaded into music match and it lasted for a minute sounding like this playing really fast, so was the clock, i loaded into my editing program internet audio mix and it shows as a 50second-ish long file that sounds like an electronic error with loads of blips, etc. i tried to reconvert it and uncook it but that doesnt work, can you please upload it again coz i think that was the error, a bad upload, try using different webspace. please reply soon coz i wanna hear your stuff, also what do u use to produce?

Ok boy luke, i have put it up on a diffrent server.
Both my sig and the first post in the thread have been edited with the new url.
Oh, and theres another version of it i am almost finished making, there is a little sample here for ya too! Enjoy!

http://www.angelfire.com/extreme3/t...halo_remix_.txt

downloading it now.

Hooray, it finally works
OKAY I'll be brutally honest, its the only way to get better:
1. You need more percussion, when the breaks finish there isnt enough percussion
2. You need a better kick-drum, I'll give you a sample if u wish
3. Unfortunately, it still sounds amateur-ish
4. Make it shorter, around about 5:30 to 6:00

I'll post again later, but I've g2g
Finally, its better than the Tiesto's Shandar vinyl

Cheers luke. You are 100 percent spot on with the comments. Even though they where negative, it helps for my next tunes.
I think it sounds amatureish really because it was made entierley in software. As i have sed before, once i get the jp-8000 at christmas, im laughing!

It´s a ok track... needs a bit more work.

more percz would be good.

The melody is good though.


LATeRZZ:z.zz.z...........

Sorry I was so negative, I'm just trying to help , I think if you did some more work and thickened the tune and shortened it to around 5:30 - 6:00 you could have a really good tune, I can't wait to hear some of you're stuff after christmas, are you sorted with you're decks yet?