Hey again,

I've tried to make something a little bit different this time, trying to include some atmospheric drums so need some feedback on that especially. Any other feedback would be more than welcome.

Semirk - Emotional Warmth right click and save as

Thanks

Last edited by Semirk on Jan-09-2006 at 15:33

OMG this is the best tune ever. you ROX!!!

edited by me

Last edited by Luke Terry on Jan-04-2006 at 16:34

Can a mod get rid of him or his posts in peoples threads please? I'm sure theres people like linkmage who do not appreciate this in amongst constructive feedback.

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Originally posted by DJ Balti Can a mod get rid of him or his posts in peoples threads please? I'm sure theres people like linkmage who do not appreciate this in amongst constructive feedback.

banning him right now, he took absolutely no notice of the warning

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Hey DJ Balti,
I understand this is a minimal genre but I would give your track some more elements. Try to engage the listener by changing elements, morphing them and having an interesting arrangement. Try to imagine your song as a painting and have a contrast between light and dark. Excite the people listening...
Keep it up
Regards
Lalin

Thanks for the ideas, will have a fiddle around with some different sounds in there.

And thanks for getting rid of that idiot from my posts.

One thing you absolutly have to do!
PAN your drums it gives a special "whoa!" for the listener
*credits for that note go to kopi luwak*
bt try it it really helped my percy tracks
btw bringg the fx that comes in around 0:53, its really cool !
keep up the good work !

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I like this tune but it needs either a couple of ear catching synths or a few bass lines to really bring it to life and grab you. I'm guess this track didn't take you very long so it's a good effort.

Hi dude,
Downloading it, will check it out tonite .
Kopi =o.

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Cheers Takkra, will get some panning on those drums as soon as I open up the file again

Syrez: This track isn't about grabbing the listener, its more about the subtle elements which is what the genre is about and my main aim is to be working on them. I don't understand your length of time to make point at all, sorry.

And thanks Kopi, look forward to the feedback as always.

well don't know what to say to it...

will something like "This is a great base for something really cool" encourage you to finish it?

I would add a few synths and prolly a pad also will sound sooooooo great I see you have many interesting ideas (but I would turn it into not that minimal genre )


The outro got my interest a bit more than the middle part...

my advise would be a very subtle melody which will not ruin the minimal approach played on a soft synth sound making a main "motif" of the tune...you know, when you wanna make a song cool, you "must" have a hook

well you don't have to...but I think if you did, this one would be brillant

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I meant you should chop some off because it gets a repetitive!