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I really like the vibe you created here and I'd love to see you take it farther man! I listened to the streamed copy and the synths sounded pretty good.. nice and gritty
I think it would definately help this tune out if you can niche a main melody into it, because the structure of your synths is already there. Now they just need a Ped Pper to lead the way!
As I mentioned everything is gritty so it's very sharp which was fitting. I think good job, but please keep working on it! I loved the filtered guitar-esque soundscape!

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nice track ideas, a few points though:

imo, percs are really odd: hats are way too loud, whereas the kick is really soft, a more pumping kick would make me wanna get up and jump around so much more :P

Also, this synth at 1.59 i think is too loud, it's all i can hear when it comes out.

Perhaps give the bass a bit another layer, maybe an octave lower with a high treble so it's kinda.. crunchy? (i dunno how to explain it.. :P)

Anyway, keep it up, with a bit more work on the mixing this could be a pretty cool track

cheers, Alex

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thanks guys, i'm happy with the percs though, not a fan of huge kicks all the time, i intentially wanted a soft popping kick.

i guess the synth is a little high in the mix but when i listen to it on my speakers it doesnt cut thru the mix too much..