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The lead hook gets a little repetitive on this and the high-end was popping my ears a bit (not enough to bleed - no worries) and could be toned down a little. I really like the idea of it and the music bed. It seemed like a lot of was going on in the back ground that may have been drowned out by the lead's prominence - it would be stuff I'd want to notch down that lead on to more adequately hear.
Love the break-beat, but there were bits that went a little too long without any beat, at all.
Keep at it, man. You've got a decent ear. It just needs experience, and maybe a little rest, as it sounds like it might be a little fatigued as evidenced by the high-end being a little too prominent.
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my old stuff, not quite up to snuff - but I still dig it - UPDATED 9/23/2012
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