Xenocreator_PG_: glad u liked my drum layers.. (I was working for hours just to make them fit the markers right) and about the end of the break.. YES! there should be something there to predict the drums coming in, I hadd that in the first version, no idea why i removed it.. thx for the comment

EternalMusic: thx.. cool u like it.. i love dark stuff

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anyone wanna collab and make an ambient remix for this?

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The Darkone - You Come With Power
The Darkone - Falling Stars Part 1 (Original Mix) *NEW*

kick should bemore stronger, nice bassline, and bongos stuff hmm its takes very long when track develope make more changes before breaks, after 2:48 its really good overall really interesting track, i like it

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nice.. breakdown kinda reminds of tastexperience (oldschool) nice.

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Second Sun - Love Simulator (pvd remix)
Angel Dust - Chimera

the beat/bassline/percs altogether ---> really original

niiice

First 3:45 minutes is very nice; I really like the hypnotic progression. The melody during the break at 3:50 sounds a little out of place, but isn't bad. My biggest suggestion would be cutting down on the length of the track. Seems to be about a minute and half too long. Otherwise a very nice toon.

By the way, have you heard Jerry Bonham's song "Seventh Seal"? This song kinda reminds me of that (at least the first 3:45 does).

thanks for the feedback everybody

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Originally posted by MaxC First 3:45 minutes is very nice; I really like the hypnotic progression. The melody during the break at 3:50 sounds a little out of place, but isn't bad. My biggest suggestion would be cutting down on the length of the track. Seems to be about a minute and half too long. Otherwise a very nice toon. By the way, have you heard Jerry Bonham's song "Seventh Seal"? This song kinda reminds me of that (at least the first 3:45 does).

havent heard that song u mentioned no, and i agree it should definitely be shorter, or more things should happen in it.. im gonna look for that song and see if i can hear a resemblence.. thx alot

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The sound is clipping right from the start. But the percs is übercool! Nice snare to replace an usual clap. Wow, those bass-sounds are funky fresh You're starting to build an armosphere after 2.00 and that's good. The DJ is now finished to beatmatch the song, so the structure is good. The bass is very powerful, though the kick should be more powerful as well. Hmm... At 03.45 something is happening. Nice strings. Over one minute with JUST strings now, that's boring. and you're bringing the percs back again without any mainmeody yet, imo. Kinda boring And btw - Armas made a tune called "Narajana" for some time ago. Marajana is pretty close But what does it mean? Solid production! Stå på din viking!

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thanks for a thorough review.. very glad u like it.. about the strings.. yeh they are unexcpected, and if they fit is really hard to say.. some say, some dont.. and tbh im not really sure myself

Maranjana is a name.. doesnt mean anything as far as i know..

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thx for the feedback everybody

link is now updated.. 192 kbps.. new improvements and mastering is supposedly done.. share, use, play, listen, throw away.. do what u like.. still looking for comments though..

cheers..!

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i like this one since i heared it the very first time. Now it's part of my dj case and collection.

i'll be waiting for your next track.

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Last edited by doreemix on Jan-11-2005 at 01:51