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alanzo
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Registered: Sep 2003
Location: Boston, MA

Why do you insist on jamming your fecal matter into my ear drums?

That instrument at 0:46 still sounds like ass when it comes in. Kill its low frequencies. It sounds half palatable after after a bit. My biggest gripe is that the track really goes nowhere interesting for the first 3 minutes. The whole thing can be summed up in about 4 seconds.

The square lead that comes in at 3:00 has a nice feel to the composition, but you should build off of that composition to add an additional two bars.

The composition on that string at 5:00 sounds like crap.

Overall it's just not very interesting, even for slow progressive trance. Try listening to some Jaytech. I think that's about the sound you're going for.

http://www.myspace.com/jaytech


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DJ Blitzkrieg
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Registered: Sep 2007
Location: Alpharetta, GA

I'm liking this a lot. It's like Andy Duguid meets James Holden!

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Evolve140
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Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Denver

Thanks for the awesome feedback guys, this one should be getting mastering soon! And thanks Alan, I *do* know who Jaytech is.

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delux
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Registered: Feb 2004
Location: LATA #51 [San Diego,Ca]

Hey man, I had to come back and leave another comment on this one - i've been listening to it a bit over the last weekend and I gotta say it's growing on me even more. great great work.

I think at this point in time, I prefer the first version of this song. I like that echoed crash thing right before the bridge. I noticed you got rid of it in the second version. I also like how the bridge has a little less going on in the first one - its a little quieter and allows you to focus on the two sounds you have going on there.

That being said, I really like the second one too. The strings are a nice touch and it seems like you accentuated that one effect and brought it to the front a little more.

Each version in itself has it's merits and I think it's going to come down to personal preference. The one thing I would do (but i dont know shit about producing) is bring the lows up a little bit. I'd like to hear the bass line deeper. I just think that makes it stand out on great speakers. But not too much of course because the other elements of the song are great and they shouldnt be drowned out!


Again, awesome. I'm looking forward to hearing what you do with the final version. Maybe PM me when you're done?

Cheers!

Andrew

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SteelWolf
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Registered: Jul 2002
Location: Tucson, AZ (for now)

By the way, I used the second version of the tune last friday at a club (hope ya don't mind) and the crowd LOVED IT!!!!
If you want a listen, its the third track in the mix:

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...849#post9553849


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BshidoHEAT
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Registered: Nov 2003
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Good stuff, not typically my style but good none of the less.
I listened to the 2nd version, and the only thing I could say is that string needs a lower frequency pad to compliment it more.


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SteelWolf
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Registered: Jul 2002
Location: Tucson, AZ (for now)

Hey man, any news on a final version of this?

I cannot let this track disappear, its really effin good


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Subtle
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Registered: Nov 2002
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Pretty nice track u got there.
My only complain would be more variation in the percussions.


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