nice percs.... The bass could use a little more beef. Sounds a bit thin for a bass sound. Try using a saw wave as well ontop of the triangle. Like the square wave synth you have used man. Very unique sound. The main lead sound could bea tad different from the one you used from "Dreams", but it still works. Melody is spot on. My only real beef is with the bass not having enough beef to it. The kick seems dominant in the low end, but the bass needs to drive the track a bit better.
Good work,
Tim (TFT)
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Sep-30-2005 22:25
KAKAAKlol
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Registered: Aug 2005
Location: Space
OMG HOT!!! REALLY IN LOVE WITH IT! Sure will get signed...
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Oct-01-2005 03:11
Icone
In Dreams...
Registered: Nov 2001
Location: Leuven, Belgium
I have to agree with TFT on the bass, it seems like there is even none present on my regular speakers (works on headphones more though).
Overall a cool track, would just like to hear it again with the bass cranked up. Would sound ace I think
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Wow that sounds really good, nice synth work. I like this a lot.
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Oct-01-2005 23:52
jupiterone
housin' guide
Registered: Dec 2004
Location: los angeles
layer a low end bass under that mid sounding one. will def. spice things up. but other than that nice stuff
Oct-02-2005 00:15
Subtle
Subreme tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2002
Location: Urban Shakedown
* listening *
damn ive heard that kick in several hundred track by now, i was still waiting for the bass as i realised the bass was already playing, u need another layer of bass there dude, the breakdown is long, nice breakbeat, the melody is not my cup of tea, but it sounds alright, the lead gets drowned in the "climax" of the track, and sounds pretty thin in the mix, and i think u should have added that upperlead way earlier after climax of the track.. track sounds uncomplete..
Sure will get signed... 
