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Firtst of all, I haven't heard the original, so no justice in how well the remixing is.. Just a fast review as I listen.
Tone down on the kick, make it fit the track better. It's just banging madly!
The synths needs some work, they sound too "standard" and boring.
Is it you who have made the cuts in the track or is it the mp3 that is bad?
There is a high frequency pad or something in the main part. It's like knifes to the ears. I can't see the purpose of that sound at all.
Now for the good parts The vocals are pretty "rocky" so the track fits them pretty well.
Good choise on the bassline even though it's standard as he**.
Overall a really cheesy track that misses some stuff. Add some effects and work on cool sounds. Tight the kick up with the rest of the track, make it punch instead of banging. Play with the vocals, make it crazy, stuff like that catches the audience.
Take care 
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Lisa Miskovsky - Still Alive (Speactra Remix)
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