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John O'Callaghan - Majestic (Vocal Mix feat Cami)
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| JohnOC |
hey guys,
well here is my latest track, featuring the beautiful Cami whom you may know from the boards. Its a vocal trancer, and bear in mind its version 1.0 of the track so the final one i send to labels will have some more stuff :)
John O'Callaghan - Majestic (Vocal Mix feat Cami)
let me know what u guys think! :happy2:
thanks-
John:p |
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| alanzo |
| Good percussion and mastering.. love the piano chords - except that the piano sounds a little fake.. over all very good.. near pro quality stuff man! |
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| Bryan Kearney |
| The vocal needs to be louder :tongue3 |
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| Shepless |
On my 3rd attempt at downloading........NOW!
Shep |
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| Luke Terry |
it does sound a bit bare like mr o'calla. melody is nice and chilling, yet driving at the same time. im not a fan of the vocals sorry, they need to be louder, and up an octave, some of it is slighly off key too. at the main break, where there is only piano and a wee synth, get a drone in there, more hands in the air than just random dotted piano notes and the high string that comes in.
just my opinion tho, im sure u can make it a minter :) |
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| Shepless |
Finally.....
Vocals need to be louder, but me m8, mastering is excellent! Fantastic breakdown with a nice piano, vocals sit in well, but are still too low in volume :(
Not too sure on the lead filtering in, sounds like you havw the cut off starting too low, sounds too stuttery if you get me? Brilliant main tune, relaxing!
Great track m8, absolutely brilliant, best i've heard from you so far!
Is this reason 2.5?
And one more question,
Any chance of a Chris Shepherd/Emota remix? ;).....PM me!
Shep |
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| Konijn Island |
sweet track mate :eyes:
like the others have said, the vocal is a little on the low side and the piano breakdown around the 5:45 mark sounds a little off -- like there there is too much dead air between each key
but overall the track was aces! nice buildup and slick mastering
good luck with your label submissions :) |
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| JohnOC |
thanks for the replies guys, feedback as always is muchos appreciatas!
| quote: | | love the piano chords - except that the piano sounds a little fake.. |
yeah i kinda agree-wasnt sure about it myself,i think ill change it for some pads in the final version!
| quote: | | it does sound a bit bare like mr o'calla. melody is nice and chilling, yet driving at the same time. im not a fan of the vocals sorry, they need to be louder, and up an octave, some of it is slighly off key too. at the main break, where there is only piano and a wee synth, get a drone in there, more hands in the air than just random dotted piano notes and the high string that comes in. |
cheers luke-yep the bare thing will be sorted(v2.0;))see the prob wit the vocals were,its a soft vocal sung quietly-when i turned the volume up i got loads of clipping,so the actual singer of the vocals(cami)needs to sing the vocals more powerfully so i dont have to hike up the vox.also agreed with the slight moments of off keyness(cami:toothless)the piano doesnt seem to be working at all eh :p ill get workin on some pads!
| quote: | | Any chance of a Chris Shepherd/Emota remix? .....PM me! |
of course man! although maybe ill wait to see if there is some interest in the track before u start remixin...i might have a new project for u to remix :thepirate
thanks again for comments lads! |
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| Endre |
hey man, the track is great, but it sounds a lil weak here, but it could be my speakers and that all the bass is off here :D heh, anyway, keep up the work mate.
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| Shepless |
| quote: | Originally posted by JohnOC
of course man! although maybe ill wait to see if there is some interest in the track before u start remixin...i might have a new project for u to remix :thepirate
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Oooooooooooo, okie dokie :)
But even there is no interest, i'd still love to give it a go. :D
Shep |
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| Mr.Mystery |
Well, it's good but it could do with some shaving, I think it's at least a minute too long.
Also, the vocals don't really sit very well on the mix.
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Actually, the percs sound a bit too simple too... |
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| DJ Terraplex |
Hey jon
Ill have a listen when i get time, but id like to hear a vocal trance track from you. Im sure it will be mint! |
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