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Romance in trance ? (2004 edition) (pg. 5)
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| AddictedTo1982 |
| A THREAD ABOUT LOVE SUCKS :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip::whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip::whip: :whip: :whip: |
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| janieliza |
| quote: | Originally posted by AddictedTo1982
A THREAD ABOUT LOVE SUCKS :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip::whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip::whip: :whip: :whip: |
agreed
so why post when it was almost....gone....arrgh...too late now |
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| ShellSh0ck |
| quote: | Originally posted by janieliza
OMG I just got chills reading that again, SHellshock you are SO what your custom status says with that one :)...And a great emotive writer (dont know if thats the word)I love the tragic romantic poetry :)
Vlad & Shellshock please feel free to PM me or post with more writing It is actually very uplifting in a way...If nothing else just the quality rocks! Mebbe we should get jobs writing for Morrisey or the Cure lol, just kidding you are much better. :D |
thx janieliza. i'm glad u enjoyed reading it. yea maybe i'll post some more stuff later on.
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| ShellSh0ck |
| quote: | Originally posted by janieliza
Vlad & Shellshock please feel free to PM me or post with more writing It is actually very uplifting in a way... :D |
I feel the sorrow in teardrops of rain,
Your voice has gone, it drives me insane.
With your picture in mind, I am guided along,
Was it my pride that drove me to become so wrong?
My mind is overtaken with dreams of the past,
The feelings for you seem to everlast.
As I reflect on the silhoutte of our last kiss,
My eyes burn with tears, it hurts to reminisce.
Loneliness and heartache are the reasons for each single word,
I wish you understood, I wish that I was heard.
You lifted my heart as each time it fell,
These emotions I pour out are the truth that I tell.
The scars of pain have not healed with time,
I'd still move heaven and earth for you to be mine.
The distance between us has grown far and wide,
But still, I keep these feelings bottled up inside.
I could stay in this dream forever and try,
The thoughts brush right past and my heart starts to die.
You pass right by, I watch and I sigh,
With each breath I take, emotions run high.
greetz Michael |
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| vtec junkie |
| quote: | Originally posted by AddictedTo1982
A THREAD ABOUT LOVE SUCKS :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip::whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip::whip: :whip: :whip: |
It will hit you BLIND!!! |
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| intelligent77 |
| quote: | Originally posted by AddictedTo1982
2003 sucked like every other crappy year for love. Screw love and I can bring up mad reasons why.So blah blah blah blah blah Love sucks ass.
On the other Hand I met some AWESOME PEOPLE:Brian ,Charlie, Sergio,The Glow Gurls, Josy, Peter, Sammy and others. :D :crazy: :tongue3
But yeah don't think love is great Its sucks :whip: |
AWWW i feel loved....
.. i lost the love of my life a couple years ago...this year we were just finalizing that... but my little loves of my life grew older this year!
*sigh* my baby isn't a baby anymore.. now he's a todler.. and my todler is a little boy now... and my babygirl.. thinks she's turning 14.... LOL...
...but i've made some great friends this year.. and have come to love and appreciate my friends much more than i ever had in the past!
...and to my bestest friend ... i love him the mostest just under my kids!... even though your the biggest goober!
but i've even come to truly care and become friends with many TA's and Dungpow peeps... love you all!
-goober princess |
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| Vlad |
| Hey, thanks, Ill be sure to throw more of my writing at you when the spontaneous rush of writing hits me. Like I said, I had alot more, not as dark and deep as the last one, but more on the looking and wanting of love or just a companion to share some time with. Hopefully I can find the ones that I wrote - probably wont but Ill look around. |
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| spacechica |
Michi,
Your words touch to the core-- your verses remind me of Shakespeare. Simple beauty, piercing in its honesty. :)
| quote: | Originally posted by ShellSh0ck
I feel the sorrow in teardrops of rain,
Your voice has gone, it drives me insane.
With your picture in mind, I am guided along,
Was it my pride that drove me to become so wrong?
My mind is overtaken with dreams of the past,
The feelings for you seem to everlast.
As I reflect on the silhoutte of our last kiss,
My eyes burn with tears, it hurts to reminisce.
Loneliness and heartache are the reasons for each single word,
I wish you understood, I wish that I was heard.
You lifted my heart as each time it fell,
These emotions I pour out are the truth that I tell.
The scars of pain have not healed with time,
I'd still move heaven and earth for you to be mine.
The distance between us has grown far and wide,
But still, I keep these feelings bottled up inside.
I could stay in this dream forever and try,
The thoughts brush right past and my heart starts to die.
You pass right by, I watch and I sigh,
With each breath I take, emotions run high.
greetz Michael |
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| djKaid |
| one thing i know for sure is that when ur with the girl u want, and a good trance dj is on, things couldnt really get much better, pretty magical and such.:eyespop: :eyespop: |
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| ShellSh0ck |
| quote: | Originally posted by spacechica
Michi,
Your words touch to the core-- your verses remind me of Shakespeare. Simple beauty, piercing in its honesty. :) |
Thx Spacechica :)
| quote: | Originally posted by djKaid
one thing i know for sure is that when ur with the girl u want, and a good trance dj is on, things couldnt really get much better, pretty magical and such.:eyespop: :eyespop: |
exactly!!! |
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| politicsofdancin |
| quote: | Originally posted by djKaid
one thing i know for sure is that when ur with the girl u want, and a good trance dj is on, things couldnt really get much better, pretty magical and such.:eyespop: :eyespop: |
yeah , i can deff relate to that ;) |
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| jp |
| quote: | Originally posted by AddictedTo1982
A THREAD ABOUT LOVE SUCKS :whip: |
Well, some variety can't harm us right?
I mean, after 100 threads about G.W.Bush even you will feel a bit warm inside when reading these posts ;) |
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