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| dbl |
well.. new track.. kinda stuck with it so have no idea if i will do more on it...
but please leave a comment :)
HERE IT IS
also feel free to give me a name for it :) |
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| Jay M |
I'd call it "No Inspiration" :)
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No just call it "Stuck"
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Downloading, hold on. |
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| Tranc3 |
Breakbeat part doesn't come in too smoothly.
The bell-like synth sounds like it's clashing with the lead synth...well more like it gets hidden behind the lead synth. EQ those tracks!
Final breakdown is too quick...feels like there should be more.
I'd add a new melody to counter the lead synth, except I'd make the notes much smaller so it gives it a faster feel. The track itself evokes feelings of running away, being trapped, cornered, etc...
I think it has potential, you just need to work on the mood of the piece. I guess a better way to say it would be to say that the lead synth evokes feelings of running away (as was previously stated), yet seems to go too slowly. Almost as if you're trying to run really fast in a dream, but you can't cause it's a dream. |
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| AZCA |
| quite nice ;) thank you ;) |
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| dj-sean |
Production wise this is quite good, really like it. Overall it kinda reminds me of Kamaya Painters - Wasteland, which is a good thing =)
I'd recommend working on the bell synth a little as it sounds a little amateur, and making the percussions stick out a bit more. They are pretty full sounding but the only bit that really comes out in the mix is the ride; I'd make the OH a lot louder and throw some more percussive type effects in there.
Aside from that this is quite good and I like it a lot; cheers! |
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| dbl |
| quote: | Originally posted by dj-sean
Production wise this is quite good, really like it. Overall it kinda reminds me of Kamaya Painters - Wasteland, which is a good thing =)
I'd recommend working on the bell synth a little as it sounds a little amateur, and making the percussions stick out a bit more. They are pretty full sounding but the only bit that really comes out in the mix is the ride; I'd make the OH a lot louder and throw some more percussive type effects in there.
Aside from that this is quite good and I like it a lot; cheers! |
gotta take a listen to that track.. don't think i have heard it
haven't panned the percussions anything really.. probably the reason why.. but thank's for the tips.. and will work some on the bell synth
but glad that you like it :) |
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| EternalMusic |
Its quite nice :),LOVE the kick, like the bass and perc though they need abit paning.
Cheers. |
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| Fundamental |
| I'm liking it mate! Your best work since Ignition in my opinion. Plenty of energy as always. Can't help you with a name though, I'm not to good on the whole naming thing. :p |
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| Lightworks |
Sounds really powerful to me, I like that drive. I have some few little pointers though.
I'd lower the additional bass layer that kicks in a bit later in the track an octave or so, it sounds a bit squeeky, if you know what I mean ;)
Percussion needs a lift I think, some more elements maybe besides a clap, hihat and drumloop (which were most apparent to me?).
I think the overall mix might be a bit overcompressed? It sounded a bit like that to me at some parts, mostly when the lead and everything was playing together. Dunno if I'm correct though, it only seemed that way.
Other than that, this has some good potential me thinks, definately keep working on it.
Cheers,
Wim |
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| tor8024 |
this sounds promising, really loving that melody!
i agree with Wim though, it does seem to be overcompressed.
i also think the part after the break could use a bit more variation..
but it definitely has the potential to be a floorfiller!
this would do great in a belgian club.
and as for a title, let's see.. how about 'Compound'?
dunno, i think one, powerful word would fit the track.. :) |
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| dbl |
thank's alot for the comments :)
well.. i haven't mastered the track at all.. hehe...
i guess i really should learn it.. but baah.. i'm to lazy.. hehe
have already added some more percussions and such to it.. made some more smaller changes too
but i'll keep working on it.. see if i can do something more with it
hmm.. compound... hmm.. maybe :) |
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| Jay M |
Hey, I still didn't give any feedback, did I.. :)
Well track begins promising, good bassdrum and i like these soft percussions in the beginning. Good bassline in my opinion, but the upcoming lead is not my style. Some nice fx you have in the break, but when the kick returns, nothing really happens.. I think it's a bit too static. I'm a fan of rushes and things changing in a track so it could be me :D
On the whole the track has something, it's not bad at all. Nice little variation by the way in the kick, e.g. at 6:00.
Keep on going, sounds ok! |
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