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Paul Gibson & Luke Terry - Infraction
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| Luke Terry |
when gibbo came to see me play on thursday we decided to make a tune, here is the result 192k full version for your listening pleasure...
Paul Gibson & Luke Terry - Infraction
comments if u can be arsed ;) |
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| marco.V |
good track!
nice melodie and a pro overall sound
thx for sharing a 192
keep it up
:eek: |
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| politicsofdancin |
i like the "kick" paul, has that pvd punch to it....good luck;)
cheers
indy |
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| Sunquest |
kick is perfect, very loud and nice, i like :whip: :whip: :whip: :whip:
i have nothing to add to the mastering, its just perfect pretty much
as for the melody, its ok, average i geuss,
ggood work, keep it up
(love the background female voice) |
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| Mr.Mystery |
Pretty good, although not really my kind of thing. The bass is great.
Clipping and distorting all over the place tho ;) |
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| DjDeComp |
audio engineering point of view:
Yeah lots off clipping
really bottom heavy, very low top end
the sine wave at 3:42 sounds awful,
the clap needs to cut into the mix more
filters sound so 8-bit
prodution:
typical trance arrangement
nice synths, strings, bass
the track "dies" at 6:05 gets boring after
other than that I like:D |
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| DJPrototypeX |
| pretty punchy beat u got there.. the structure keeps the flow interestin IMO.. all the elements are great, but that melody.. iono.. i didnt like it.. thas my only beaf with the song is the melody.. |
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| Fractal |
Nice work indeed :)
Maybe not my style of melody but still pretty ok.
And the kick is a bit too loud for my personal taste.
Keep it coming ;)
//Max |
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| chris_spence |
nice tune here mate! keep it up!
Chris:) |
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| djHollen |
Hey Luke and Paul,
Great song. Unique melody. I like it.
I love the hihat. Its got a nice sound.
Kick is nice too. Real nice beat youve created.
Its a great track overall.
Hollen |
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| broken silence |
listening
Nice ass perc, did you use loops?
production sounds pretty good so far... something i'll cover at the end though.
nice, you have kicks represented very well at least in the buildup.
could use more sfx like sweeps, etc. add some more drive to the track.
really dry mix, could use much more reverb on your synths and bass to make it seem bigger and spacious.
Nice strings at the break.
chord structure is pretty cool. ominous feel to it.
woah really weird fill at 345ish, need to take all of that out, the dropping sine wave and the kicks just dont sound right.
I like the melody but it sounds really close to pulser's style, almost a rip. sorry to say that so harshly dude...but it really does, especially in the first 2 bass changes.
Rather long mix too..
Finished...
Aside from the melodies etc, you gotta add more reverb to this track. Synths are ultra dry. And they sound very un-eqed. I can tell that it was done in reason (obviously) because of the un-eqed parts. They sound so dry and plasticy without some serious treatment (thats why i sequence in cubase if i use reason).
sounds like you got a solid mix here...no complaints there..needs a little work though.
and if i were you i'd completely change the melody. (no offence again, just sounds way too much like his style) |
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| Luke Terry |
| quote: | Originally posted by broken silence
Aside from the melodies etc, you gotta add more reverb to this track. Synths are ultra dry. And they sound very un-eqed. I can tell that it was done in reason (obviously) because of the un-eqed parts. They sound so dry and plasticy without some serious treatment (thats why i sequence in cubase if i use reason). |
it was done in fl hehe. that fill at 3:45 seems to be an issue and it will be changed. which pulser tune do you mean? thanks for the long review tho :) |
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