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Oceanlab - Satellite (Fineart 'Bluestar' Mix)
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| fineart |
Hey everyone,
I would like to show a sample of my unfinished and unposted remix project for the anjunabeats remix competition. Not every parts of this buildup are good , pls tell me your opinion. It will help me a lot.
Oceanlab - Satellite (Fineart 'Bluestar' Mix) |
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| teknasia |
damn! nice remix!
I would love to hear the break of this track cuz the sample stops when the breaks begins :)
Nice percussion! As well as tha juno sound!
The strings could me more phatter.. but that's just my personal opinion :)
great work! |
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| ilovetrance18 |
amazing:)
great stuff:D |
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| DjCommisad |
was the off panning supposed to be part of the track? it distracted me, and that's something you don't really want to do in sound. anytime you cause someone to pause or stop they lose momentum, they loose their mood, they pause to think and you lose them.
either make the panning more fuller (over a phrase or half a phrase) or time it more tightly. or even get rid of it.
the beginning sounds very tight, and then the strings you bring in, i don't know, could work, might be cheesey. the bass and drive though is awesome. |
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| josh |
| I like the song alot. But i agree on the beginning which I find it tight. But it can be very nice if it is not too tight.. But I like it overall |
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| fineart |
Hi there.
Thanx for the feedbacks.
teknasia : the strings suxx, i was in hurry and I messed up the things. I concetrated on the bassline and the tb303:).anyway the breakdown part is not finished and i doesnt sound so good.
DjCommisad: which part doyou think of where i use pan-off ?? bu yea strings sound bad.
Sure that I won''t finish it but maybe I will polish it entirely and make an own track of it. |
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| Fundamental |
| Sounds good, although I prefer the other mix. Percussion sounds good, but I think it needs more variation. Bassline is nice and driving. Nice work. :D |
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| fineart |
| someone said this is tight. what do ya mean by tight ? does the buildup too early present the bassline and the other instruments? |
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| Jay M |
Very clear and sharp production. Don't know if thats too good, the bassline has to many highs. The chicane-thingy coming at 0:40 needs to be higher than the bassline, i guess, but it isn't. Vocals and hihats are a bit too sharp I guess. Could use some fx.
This is going to be a great track if you tweak it a few bits! |
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| fineart |
yes Jay M. You are right.
I am gonna eq the bass and the pluck as soon as possible. |
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| djdavid |
| personally i find this track too much a standard trance track, i'm sorry... furthermore the track sounds a little empty at the beginning of the sample as well as where the break starts. you should add some more layers. |
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