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Alan Marcero - Armana ----- Melodic Floor Killa! ;)
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| TI2ance |
Hey mate,
Nice work, you are really improving!
Some comments...
Percs sound a bit flat (esp clap)..
I like when the strings come in, the melody really has some great potential..
When the arp complements the strings I can really see things happening here.. Thicken things up a little. The arp sounds a little thin. Maybe it needs a boost in the lower spectrum.
Overall the track is alot better then the original you showed me which shows you are really improving. This is great.. I look forward to seeing your progress!
Keep up the good work mate. |
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| alanzo |
I fixed the problems you noticed TI2ance.. definitly right about them.. thanks..
Any more feedback? :D |
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| alanzo |
| feedback.... I.. NEED.. FEEDBACK!..... |
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| Skiz |
wow, good quality sound here
I like the melody very much, the strings have a bit of 'pipebag' feeling :D they go very well with the arp.
still could use some mastering on the arp. (in the beginning)
nothing more to say here.
greetz,
skiz |
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| Sirocco |
| quote: | Originally posted by alanzo
feedback.... I.. NEED.. FEEDBACK!..... |
why is phillip seymore hoffman in ur avatar and sig lol :stongue: :stongue: :stongue:
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| alanzo |
| quote: | Originally posted by Sirocco
why is phillip seymore hoffman in ur avatar and sig lol :stongue: :stongue: :stongue:
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haha.. other ppl say I look like Elton John.. but I think they're full of :p |
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| pho mo |
Nice tune there, alanzo. Sounds like you've been getting into the classical music a bit recently!
The strings + arp combination is particularly potent. |
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| Massive84 |
kick is a bit weird, bass sounds a bit weak, could use more strenght.
i find the tune to fast, less bpm maybe?
i think the melody and pad are a bit to loud, but i ain't sure about that, listening on crappy headphones..
melody is nice :). |
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| Stories |
| For the type of tune you're going for (I feel a heavy melodic trancer), I feel as if the BPM should come down about 5 or so... it's a tad fast. In the beginning, I feel like the the claps come in a bit too early, it sounds a bit cluttered. The main lead melody has potential, but I feel like it should come down an octave or so... it seems a bit... perky if you know what I mean. |
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| Jay M |
A bit fast I think. I'd use another kick, or lower it a few notes. It all sounds a bit thin, try to put some chorus over the synths or so. When it all comes together the whole sounds pretty uplifting and not bad at all. Kick and synth need improvement tho, IMO.
Keep up!
-Jay |
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