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Shadowdance - Nocturne (finally something new from me)
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| State of Matter |
After taking a couple months off to concentrate on other things, I finally have something new. It's a lot different from my normal stuff but hopefully you will enjoy it.
http://www.musicv2.com/artist/stateofmatter
All comments and feedback are appreciated :) |
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| .A.Y. |
hey man!
didnt heared your tracks before so i dont know whats your normal style.. but you should stay with this one!! heh
sounds really great
but here are some things you should fix:
the piano volume is too high
the kick is a little weak, make him stronger
in 2:00 you need to make the bass stronger
cauze the track sounds a little bit empty just becauze of him
you fix those things and i think you can sign this track EASILY..
really awesome work..! |
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| EternalMusic |
som!
Been ages now :D.
Anyway, this is pretty nice. The kick is abit weak, the piano is really too high. The lead is great!!! What did you use for it?
Bass Could be better too. Other than that, its mint :D, good to see you back among us. |
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| Sunquest |
hmm nice :D
i agree kick is a bit weak
that piano thing is a little loud too, its ear peircing
overall i really like it
just some volumes to fix and thats it
this sounds like the next vadim zhukov :D
no joke ;)
good work
peace out |
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| Jay M |
Hey
Track misses a bit of a theme. Piano is a bit to loud i guess and bass a bit weak.. but that's already been said, isn't it.. ;)
Rest is ok. Keep it up,
-Jay |
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| State of Matter |
Thank you all for the comments.
I've updated the sample to have a stronger, more solid lowend (kick + bass). I was having some EQ problems with the secondary bassline that was resulting in some muddiness, its a lot cleaner now. Also lowered the velocity on the three piano notes that were i guess kinda high pitched.
EM: I used pro 53 for everything, as always :) |
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| christofa |
| great track, but azure symphony is still my favorite track of yours :) |
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| jcosgrove |
really loving this for sure....piano is a bit too loud, but its really good work.
i'd definitely play this one for sure
:D |
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| State of Matter |
Updated once again with a softer piano and a stronger clap.
christofa: haha, fair enough. I need to get around to finishing that revamp
james: thanks. I can upload the full 192 track to your ftp if you'd like? |
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| eulerfx |
| Whoa great. I like the layered atmosphere, sounds very professional. The lead is nice, dark and subtle. Your other stuff is great too... |
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| jcosgrove |
| quote: | Originally posted by State of Matter
Updated once again with a softer piano and a stronger clap.
christofa: haha, fair enough. I need to get around to finishing that revamp
james: thanks. I can upload the full 192 track to your ftp if you'd like? |
my msn or my ftp aint working at the moment....
could you possible PM me a url??
:) |
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| alzalam |
| whoa , this is a good one! I would also really like a full version of this. You could upload it to my ftp and I could send it to james if that works? Nice one man |
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