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soundrush - distant galaxy [ trance ] (pg. 3)
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| citizeN |
hey man cracking work, its obvious you spend alot of time ensuring that your 'sounds' are of a professional caliber!
Great feel to this track.
Just wondering what setup you got to produce this as i saw in one of the replys that you use reason?
Keep it fruity!
Regards
-citizeN |
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| ONION |
ok, i will be as honest as possible.....
There are some very good parts to your tracks... and theres some very very ordinary cheesy parts to your track.
Good:
* pads
* percussion
* bassline
* the key change in the bassline
* SOME sfx ( note not all )
Crap:
* Leadline
* Cheesy sounds / melodies ( not your pads )
* Break is awful ( especially the breakbeat crap )
Sumarry:
I wouldnt buy / play this... having said that you are very talented, especially if this is a first tune... well done on a great effort... Try to make your melodies subtle, spacey and tight... you need to work a bit on your sequencing too...
Keep up the good work : ) |
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| soundrush |
thanks guys...
@ onion... im not 100% pleased with the lead and im working on that already... |
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| danxxx |
Absolutely stunning tune. Really enjoyed this one, very proffesional sound. I really can't think of anything to critic...
As to the sounds sounding cheesy as someone said, they are wrong! |
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| X-Multiply |
| soundrush very impressed! This is your very first track or just your first one sharing with us? And secondly, this was created 100% in Reason? Very, very nice work. |
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| Dance123 |
Hi Soudrush,
The production in your tune is really good I think. I believe there are many club labels in Germany, so you should be able to find one! Good luck!!
I also have a request for you. I really like that "splashy" clap sound you use in your track. Would it be possible to upload that sample for me! I would really appreciate it! Thanks! :)
PS: if you have no upload space, please let me know so I can help you with that! |
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| Sebraa |
| Cool track but work with the LEAD sound more before sending to labels, right now they would say -> NOT BAD AT ALL and thats all ;) BASSLINE and PERCUSSION -> TOP NOTCH!!! Breakbeat is not good, hurts my ear comparing with rest of the song! But defo good one |
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| Aerodrome |
| Pretty nice track I think. I really like the build up, nice atmosphere. But I'm not a big fan of your lead, it could use some more power. After the break it collapses a bit i think, it should 'banging' a bit more in the climax. But over all it's a really professional track with a nice atmosphere but I think it could use some improvements. |
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| soundrush |
a sample of the final version has been uploaded. no need for feedback anymore. thanks for the help.
cheers, niklas |
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| Timothy |
| Have you allready signed the track or are you still planning? :D |
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| Stino |
| link isnt working... |
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| Woody4eva |
Well I would disagree with Orion and say that I like your breaks. The pads are awesome and the bass is top notch.
Overall: 8/10 |
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