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Making On Tune "forever"
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| BuRoLovesTrance |
Hi guys I am making on my new tune called "Forever" I will be glad if you give me your opinions of this first raw sample of it.....but remember this is only the first "raw" sample....
Please check it here - http://www.audionet.sk/Mp3/down.php?ids=2883
thanx.... ;) |
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| Sunquest |
damn ur signature is big hehe,
anyways ur track, really soft synth starting, very soothing to the ears :D
now come the bass and beats, vvery slow and hard (good thing) , really mastering on the beats and bass, i like the guitar in the background, u could make it a lot louder, but so far so good, finish it up m8
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| smrq |
| Very nice, excellent production... not a fan of the first synth too much, but everything afterwards sounds sweet. The 0:28 guitar sounds really great, and 0:56 to the end of the sample is perfect. As Sunquest said, finish it up! |
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| EtherealSL |
nice plucked! i'm a huge huge fan of plucked and it sounds like you've got three different plucks goin on in this song
so pretty much, i wet my pants
it might be helpful to add a secondary bassline or some synth to fill out that bass |
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| BuRoLovesTrance |
| Thanx guys for opinions....there will be many changes you know ;) |
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| BuRoLovesTrance |
| I have updated it a little....if you want then check ;) |
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| optik |
good and clean production
nice bassdrum and clap
waiting for a bassline.... oh there it is ;)
having just listened to someones robert miles remix - this is very dream house/robert miles esque
soume nice sounds in there, it fills the field well
would like it to drop into something with a little more energy, but as it stands it has a nice feel to it =) |
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| Blincc |
| ohhhh my...... this sounds sooooo awesome.. :wtf: :wtf: LOVE ur style, superb chill vibe, keep it up |
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| BuRoLovesTrance |
| quote: | Originally posted by Blincc
ohhhh my...... this sounds sooooo awesome.. :wtf: :wtf: LOVE ur style, superb chill vibe, keep it up |
:) thanx :) |
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| EtherealSL |
i see you've updated... this is good, pounding kick, but at teh same time, very atmospheric and chilled... it seems that bass is way too much in teh foreground and needs to be suppressed a little, but that might be because of the terrible acoustics in my dorm room.
i like those vox, makes everything seem much chill.. and yes, this does seem very robert miles-like... which is good, "dreamland" was very good stuff.
lemme konw when you got the full version done |
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| BuRoLovesTrance |
| I have updated it a little, I have added a break and new synths...what do you think ? thanx... |
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| Luke Terry |
this is very nice, personally i think the guitar sounds a bit thin compared to some of the other elements in there, im sure you could sort that out tho ;) lemme know when u get it finished!
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