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a98 - Untitled (melodic trance trying to get signed)
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| pho mo |
Sounds great man, all the best selling it. I'd put a few more fx and stuff in the breakdown, but it works pretty well anyway.
good luck! |
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| Timothy |
| It sounds really good indeed. :D |
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| M1cro5lave |
My best luck to you mate!
I hope you get it signed, it's a really good tune. ;) |
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| d-miurge |
Nice work indeed...
Good luck ! ;) |
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| RickyM |
This is a cool track - good opening - nice bass
super synths - you cant predict what notes they will be hitting - I like that.
Very dreammy break.
What software did you use? |
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| dannyc |
hi a98.
sorry man i find this one very hard to listen too, it seems to lack a serious amount of energy, transistions, effects, percussion, synths, basically its lacking layers in my opinion. and it sounds somewhat out of tune on the main melody. it might just be because its in lo-fi but i'm not feeling it.
production and mastering wise thou i'd say its very good since this is 64kbps and it still sounds very nice and clean.
in my opinion i think you need to introduce more elements, so the bassline does'nt get boring and structure the melody at the break better by using nice big strings or synths.
sorry if i'm sounding harsh but when i hear a producer with obvious talent i feel they should get the necassary honest feedback. listening from the point of view of a potential label owner who would maybe know sweet FA about production and just basically liking or not liking what he hears.
p.s. i'm only producing 6months or so and nearly finished mastering my second tune so when i stick it up soon, you can slate me too bits hehe ;) |
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| alexpea |
This one is kinda boring from 00.00 to 03.00... Hmm...let's see now - here's a melody..Nothing special yet (04.20) :tongue3 Nope, the melody isn't making its way into my heart.. Totally uninteresting melody, imo. And in the mainpeart, the pads are too loud. If you mute them on your mixer, everything would probably sound very empty, because they are filling alot of space in the soundpicture at the moment...
I agree with the the guy who replied before me - don't waste your talent on such boring productions. The melody in this one was lame. Very lame. Sorry :rolleyes:
I think the tune that you have in "the official beatmaka mix" has much greater chances of being signed. That one is awsome!!! :eyespop: |
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| RiCo |
| I don't know...the main melody might not be massive, but I like it because it's different. The song itself is very boring in the beginning but I still liked it a lot...sounds anthemish. |
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| a98 |
thanks guys...
there is a lot to fix now..
mainly the main melody which sounds amateur, gonna try to get it flow somewhat better maybe change some notes or something. |
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| .A.Y. |
i dont think the track is boring!
i think he is great
the melody is great too!
really good job!
but i think you have alot of work on the production.. everything sounds way too loud..
anyway great job and good luck.. |
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| Perry |
if ull get signed u can get sued either...for grabbing a stolen samples..your kick in this tune is stolen from: "Aalto - Rush"...
concider that by taking other artist's sample can get sued or just turn you down.
very nice track indeed and as A.Y said work on the production and use your own freaking samples ... Goodluck. |
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