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[p.e.g] - chiba (192 Kbps) melodic trance (pg. 3)
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| auujay |
| Great tune. If I get my FinalScratch out to the club I will spin this bad boy :) |
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| ichiro |
Very nice. Theres a lot going on in there but the all parts shine through nicely.
very corsten/tiesto 2000 style, perhaps a bit tougher than them.
nice one:gsmile: |
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| dannyc |
nice tune as always from you pho, flawless mastering too. enough said.
keep it up
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| AstralNrg |
ING GREAT...
GREAT MASTERING
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NICE STUFF |
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| Derivative |
wow. this is good. i am however of the mind whereby however good something is you can always make it better :D
the open hats at the start are very murkey and the bassline is a bit, i dunno what the word is, plain but only at the start. towards the end when the open hats become clear again its like a different sample? or you have removed some of the effects on it? when everything kicks in this track RIPS. real dance floor stomper. the melody is clean and its right at the front of the mix right where it should be. the kick is prominant all the way through which i have problems with sometimes so gooooood job.
post break down this track really wanders in a very nice way. something about the melody reminds me of addagio for strings for a split second. nice touch. around 3/4 of the way through the melody seems to sink into the swells in the background for a little bit (it gets clearer later) and it loses its clarity for a little bit. the kicks right at the end (although the same sample) sounds real trebly without the bassline going with it. maybe worth layering a subbier kick with that just for the outro to keep it boppy all the way to the end.
overall though its a bit of a stonker. way ahead of my stuff. work on this and go for a signing cuz i could dance like a crack monkey to this. i do likes me hard trance. |
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| headenema |
Nothing to add apart from what everyone else has said, so well done on an absolute stormer of a track. Definitely one of the best "amateur" productions I've heard this year. Would love to hear it on a big system.
Good luck.
Rob
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| pho mo |
Thank you so much to EVERYBODY who has listened to my tune, I'm really overwhelmed by the excellent comments :)
I've got some good feedback from some DJs and I'm definitely going to fix up the things that everybody has commented on.
It's great getting feedback like this, thanks a lot to ionized, alexpea, joeyenv, McManaman, derivative for the constructive criticism, all are very good points and I'm going to look into all of those ideas, and am looking forward to polishing up this track for playing in clubs :) |
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| pho mo |
| quote: | Originally posted by JohnWright
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Wow, completely stoked about this. Thanks! |
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| dannyc |
it really is a great track pho, you dont make enough in my opinion, it reminds me of the old airbase sound which i still love.
cant see why this would'nt get signed. good luck with it man!
your definetly one of the top few producers here.
keep it up looking forward to your next track
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| dartman |
| this track is awesome, good work. keep 'em coming :crazy: |
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| isoterra |
Man wow.. this really reminds me of the type of stuff Tiesto was caining in the 2nd half of TIC2... GOOD energetic melodic trance :D sounds amazing
Only gripes are with the bass being a lil heavy on some notes... & the break could maybe have more power in it
But still this is a badass tune overall.. get it out there! Can see big names playing this :) |
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