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manvel - alisa (static blue remix)
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| xternal |
hey everyone!
been a long time since i havent posted some of my work. here's a remix of the WONDERFUL tune "manvel - alisa" (a track posted on anjunabeats forum).
Track Info:
Genre: Trance
Quality: 128 kbps
Length: 7:28
manvel - alisa (static blue remix)
The track isn't finished, it still needs a lot of tweaking ;) if you have some comments, dont forget that feedback is always highly appreciated.
enjoy :)
static blue |
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| d-miurge |
hey mr, good work, the mastering isn't really finished as you said (ex : the fade in to begin, the kick need to be stronger imo, the build up lead can be layered with more delay or reverb, the Fx at 1.48 is awfull :D ) but the piano works well, the style is great, the lead remind me a bit "the thrillseekers", the construction is awesome too, so, keep it up ! :)
Edit : the melody remind me burned with desire ! :eyes: |
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| Massive84 |
Strong start.
To bad the Bass isn't aggressive as i hoped it would be when it kicked in but still a good one.
that saw synth could be better imo, piano is nice.
hmm the intro was a bit long but personally i don't mind that, maybe other peopel do.
piano really needs some huge pad work, choir only doesn't magnify the feel the piano has.
Further the main melody didn't really do alot to me, but thats not your fault and thats taste. |
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| xternal |
hey thanks both of you, don't forget i'm still working on it ;). D-miurge: The fade in to begin was an attempt to show that it wasn't the finished track, just a large sample :).
Anyway i appreciate your comments, thanks |
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| xternal |
| any other feedback ??? |
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| Sunquest |
yo man, this mastering is pretty good already i dunno whatchu talkin about :P
intor is solid, good first 2 minutes, beats, bass, all great, really nice piano, melody is pretty kewl too but maybe u can add more elements when it all hits because its gettin too repetitve, u need more high note melodies hapening, its too low, overall its pretty good, sounds VERY armin style, not kidding hehe
all u gotta work on is make clap louder
and add a lot more high note melodies and background melodies to make it fuller :)
great work man, keep it up (Y) <--- in msn :) |
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| gerrycueto |
| yeah the mix is pretty solid already... If you're going to make the clap louder, turn down some mid frequencies on it, but if you're not, it's cool the way it is. Great work!! Let me know when you are finished. :) |
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| xternal |
Thanks !
yes i will share the finished version, after fixing things and trying to get a more bigger climax for the main part.
:) peace |
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| SignalRunners B |
Hey,
I really am diggin the intro so far- the wispy percussion works well and the synthy pad that fades in and out is awesome--- along with the bandpassy hits that come ever so often! I like how the synths dance around the track, sounds very cool!
The chord changes are mint as well. The arrangement could use a bit of work- try checking out other productions and get a feel for what bits come in on which blocks- might just be personal preferance but I think the break should come a bit earlier in the track, but still keep all the elements in the introduction cause they are great! Just if the arrangement was made more snappy then it'd have more of a punch and drive in the introduction.
The break is lovely, wicked pianos- Sounds promising m8!
Enjoyed this remix thoroughly :) |
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| JoeyEnv |
Luvin this man. I like the build, contary to what people say ... a decent build is what structures a tune imo. So, based on that, potentially you got a fookin amazing trancer here. Sound is nice and clean ... frequencies are a tad too high but it can be tweaked. Mastering is good. Sounds a wee bit too empty though. Try messing with some reverb on the bass or building a few other synths. Piano is beautiful.
Good work.;)
--j |
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| xternal |
| thannks :) for commenting ! |
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| dbl |
*listening*
bass sounds nice.. i think the kick need's more power thou
percussions sounds nice
i like the piano :)
lead sounds nice.. but i think it lack's power
really nice remix thou :) |
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