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[Prog-Trance]Sunquest-Sunquest(Massive Remix)<Sample>
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| Massive84 |
Oke, i made a post earlier today with a pic, but it ended up in a small "massive buy a new pc thread" :p
But i finished this i think, Ron is pleased as welll, made the break better and such, posting a 3.25 min sample, since it will go to labels with the original. i think
Bitrate 256
Bpm 130
Comments are welcome :D
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| lagrom12 |
i check this out :)
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heard it and its nice :)
good work |
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| thoughtlessjex |
I like that ambient kick in the break. Very classy.
I didn't really like that high pass stuff before everything came back in. It made me get real tense, as high pass filters tend to do.
Good proggy feel throughout. I liked it a lot. |
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| gerrycueto |
| yeah get rid of that highpass filter... prog is supposed to be chillin... this isn't a hard house tune. Open hat could use work, but everything so far so good mate.. Keep up the good work :) |
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| davidemonin |
| Hey Fahad, I am liking this. Sounds a little closer to melodic prog. Hehe i hear some shinshara sounds in this, and a great compliment to the remix. Man i am really liking your notes and atmospheres, really nice. But maybe tighten up the quality of the sounds a little to sound a little warmer. MSN me when you are done with this.;) |
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| sooper |
Pure quality!
Love the 'heartbeat' kick during the break.
Such tasty sounds in here!
Nice filter work on the percs.. no suggesetions at all - this is great! Fine work Fahad,
trev |
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| Trazedict |
| love this tune. its perfect :D the atmosphere during the break is amazing, really addicting sounds youve got floating around in there. good luck with the labels mate :D |
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| Massive84 |
Thanks :)
Ya that filter still not good. Thing is when i play this part in Reason i get msg computer to slow hehe.
What should be warmer? more reverb or something? Catch you on msn when you can David. |
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| DJ-Kreing^^ |
The tune is really really good, but that you probably know already.
So here is some constructive criticism from my point of view:
- First, you got to phatten up your percussion, its just so very basic the way it is now. An open hat/ride on every off beat is not enough. I mean it just lacks the energy and vibe a good prog trancer needs to have. Try adding some more percussive elements to make it thicker, more powerful and less repetitive. Some congos, different layers of hats, bells…stuff like that.
- The breakdown even though it has a great atmosphere and all, is really to long. I mean if that’s supposed to be progressive trance then a its brakedown can't last for 2 whole minuts. It might be cool for home listening but people who dance to it in a club will just get bored.
- The whole thing lacks sharpness, not enough high frequencies. This does give your tune a dreamy feel but lowers its energy. Maybe try re-eqing it or something, maybe even lowering the reverb.
- 3:00, there are two lead synths at that point, and it seems like they are both in the background of the mix. At least one of them needs to take the role of the main lead and stand out abit more. I also didn’t like the filters passes you used on the lead there.
That’s it, hopefully you will find some of this critics help full.
Cheers! |
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| Massive84 |
| quote: | Originally posted by DJ-Kreing^^
The tune is really really good, but that you probably know already.
So here is some constructive criticism from my point of view:
- First, you got to phatten up your percussion, its just so very basic the way it is now. An open hat/ride on every off beat is not enough. I mean it just lacks the energy and vibe a good prog trancer needs to have. Try adding some more percussive elements to make it thicker, more powerful and less repetitive. Some congos, different layers of hats, bells…stuff like that.
- The breakdown even though it has a great atmosphere and all, is really to long. I mean if that’s supposed to be progressive trance then a its brakedown can't last for 2 whole minuts. It might be cool for home listening but people who dance to it in a club will just get bored.
- The whole thing lacks sharpness, not enough high frequencies. This does give your tune a dreamy feel but lowers its energy. Maybe try re-eqing it or something, maybe even lowering the reverb.
- 3:00, there are two lead synths at that point, and it seems like they are both in the background of the mix. At least one of them needs to take the role of the main lead and stand out abit more. I also didn’t like the filters passes you used on the lead there.
That’s it, hopefully you will find some of this critics help full.
Cheers! |
hell yes, the higher frequency thing worked like a charm, just adjusted the main EQ.
Hmm there is really allot of perc going on, most of them are subtle, and i like that
Long breakdowns is my thing :).
Cheers buddy :) |
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| ProjecT Cali |
first of all - nice sounds...great connection of beat/bas and synth...i can also feel warm ambient while listening to it:) but for me this brake is too long:)
2:57 - there is something wchih doesn't fit to this crossing I think..like it was too sudenly...:) but the whole sample is great... grats for this tune:) and give me a try checking my track:
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=225378
greetz guys:) |
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| RickyM |
Production is very nice
The break is maybe a bit too long - but when it all kicks in it sounds great.
I think that the bass is off key on the 3rd chord change on the main melody......so maybe change that.
Other than that - good tune. |
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