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Dj Paolo
Here's a new one from me

Made With: Reason 2.5
112 kbps
137 bpm
6:36

http://www.sitesled.com/members/pau...ynx%20(112).mp3
Massive84
Yo paul.

Good track, nice choice of sounds and plucks.

Break was indeed good a good part in this track, however the track didn't reach any peak. Which made it dissapointing for me in a way.

The percussion area could be better, it needs more drive, especially if you want the climax to explode :).

Good job on the rest :).
Sirocco
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Originally posted by Dj Paolo
Here's a new one from me

Made With: Reason 2.5
112 kbps
137 bpm
6:36

http://www.sitesled.com/members/pau...ynx%20(112).mp3


you have blessed ears, child. you them to make some more masterpeices. i was 15 when i started producing, and your only gonna get better. i enjoyed this track a lot, but it needa a tad more drive on the bass, like outback ;p so i guess more sub bass
eulerfx
- mastering is really good
- nice sounds and layering
- those underlying intro melodies sound good
- break down needs a little more stuff going on in the background, but the melodies are great.
- i like how the bass comes in, in the break
- like Massive said, break needs more of a build up, as it gets kind of boring.
- overall, good track, but i would add more stuff, like pads to fill up some of the emptyness.
che
haven't seen anythign from you in a while....will download when i get home...can't wait!!
Dj Paolo
thanks for the reviews :) :)
sooper
Good sounds in here! the levels are spot on.

I like the minimal feel this one has, though a few more layers couldn't hurt. Great use of delay!

Looking forward to hearing more of your stuff,
Trevor
Lombardo
yea man. Really deep minimal feel. You did all in Reason. Thats great!

Kick sounds great. I love the delays on the trance sounds and the bass.
Dj Paolo
thanks sooper and lombardo :)
Timothy
Just like your last one, it's a very good track. For someone your age, I won't be suprised if you will be big someday :)

Dj Paolo
thanks timothy :)
Jay M
Is this finished? It's minimal, ok, but i feel there's room for more in there. Synth sounds are good. Bass is plain, but not annoying. Has an electronic feel. Break needs more attention..

Ok this has potential but it feels unfinished..
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