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my first post here:-) daniel neumann - reversed logic (original mix)
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| Daniel.Neumann |
| anyone??????? |
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| tieann |
| I really like it! It's a little simple and generic, but all of the elements in it are awesome. I think if you added something to make it stand out, this could be a really good track. Everything is kickass, but it all sounds like every other trance song :D |
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| goatus |
wow very nice.
I loved it. |
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| Daniel.Neumann |
thanks for feedback.
ive put a lot of work into this track:-) glad it showes :-)
anyone else????? |
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| sooper |
Hi Daniel,
well you've got the standard trance sounds down pat. I think you need to add a little variation to the melody.
I like the bass, gives the song good energy.
Not too sure if the piano fits. Also, the strings could use some fx cause they sound too pure - hope that makes sense!
nice song over all, though it could benefit from a more unique sounding melody,
Trevor |
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| Daniel.Neumann |
thanks for feedback
i personely dig the melody, bacause it is that simple.
i wasnt sure myself if the piano fitted.
Work on string (ill try that)
Daniel |
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| Sunquest |
hey man
nice power on the kick and bass, and beats, maybe lower the volume of some of the percs, its too like tktktktktktktktkt,
the synth needs a little work on...
good pads, nice background electro synth
melody is alright, when it all hits, i think theres too much going on, u gotta make some sounds in the background, and choose others to be the more louder ones, (which will be the main melodies...)
so thats that, ull definatly get better i can hear it...
keep postin m8,
hear u l8r :)
peace out |
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| wwu.punisher |
| Work on the volume on the percs, as Sunquest said... and you might consider smoothing out the bass a bit. It got a bit punchy at times. Otherwise, incredible effort. I enjoyed it immensely. |
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| Trazedict |
| really enjoyed listening to this. that muffled synth in the first half of the song is delicious. quality tune. its up there with some fine trance songs IMO. enjoyed the listen. |
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| Daniel.Neumann |
hey guys thanks for feedback
work on my perc, got that, and ill try that (but im not sure how i should prevent it from goind tktktktktk) i think it is whats driving the track
but thanks :-)
Daniel |
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| Lightworks |
Good, solid work mate, this sounds very nice to me. Bass and percs drive the track well. Melodies are well laid out as well.
I think Sunquest means the closed hihat, it is on and in between the kick. If you smoothen out the percs a bit more, I'm sure it'll work out fine.
I'd perhaps add some things to the break, to fill it up a bit more. Piano isn't really necessary I think... Maybe a different sound would do better for me. Not too sure about the sound of the lead either, something makes it sound a bit 'hollow' to me.
Other than that, great work! Keep it up.
// Wim |
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