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Shadowdance - Fluorescent Moon
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| TranceFantasy2k |
| sounds good. love the strings and the piano. All around i love you tracks, especially scarlet oak. Just wish you could have made this one a little bit longer but it's damn good for being made in a day. |
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| tylerc |
Beautiful stuff man. Great melody, great sounds. I love the deep bassy saw pad. Definitely like the chimes when it kicks in.
I guess the only thing I can gripe about is the long kick roll. I think I'm just getting sick of rolls in general tho.
Keep it up kid. |
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| chris_spence |
This is excellent stuff man! Sounds a bit like 'Radiance' but that was mint too:up: Get this finished:D
Chris |
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| TOR |
you're the king of strings, mate.. theses are huge again. gorgeous melody too.
i'm well impressed |
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| Mane |
| very well produced track :) melodie is ok, nice string and bacground :) overall very good track but you can make lots better tracks :p |
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| EtherealSL |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceFantasy2k
All around i love you tracks, especially scarlet oak. |
:D :D
anyways, nice track, glad you filled those strings out, now this sounds a lot fuller and thicker. can't wait for that rework of "sapphire (storm)" |
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| State of Matter |
Thanks a lot guys, really appreciate the feedback. Will stick this one on my demo, let's hope for the best.
TranceFantasy2k: The song itself is 8:54, this is just a sample ;) |
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| State of Matter |
| Anybody else? Where is everybody... |
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| Subtle |
| great quality.. good atmosphere.. nothing really to point the finger on.. u will probably get this released if u finish it :) good work |
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| DJ-Kreing^^ |
Nice work man!
The sound quality is really good, sounds really professional. Love your synth work… melody is quite nice, nice chord progression.
The break has a nice dreamy feel to it, love the pianos…
1:02 – its just sound wrong here, seems like the way you arranged the notes of the lead synth which kicks in at that point doesn’t go well with the piano notes. I dont know maybe its just me, but check it out.
Over all, this is a great solid production, well done. |
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| eulerfx |
- use different synth for strings, make them fuller and more realistic, or more Airwave sounding.
- pianos are very nice, but make them louder and fuller as well
- good atmosphere in the song, don't see this kind of feel much these days :)
- clean up the hats, they seem too muddy]
- add more snare |
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