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Bren-F - Beyond The Clouds (pg. 3)
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| Dj_Underwater |
| I don't like bassline ,percusion is ok but nothing special,melody is good but you should add some fx to it .Overall nice but a bit cheesy for my taste ;) |
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| Lightworks |
Good one there so far mate, lovely melody as well. Really like those choirs and pads, though as TOR said, could perhaps use a bit more stereo. Bassline and percs do their job very well.
I'll keep an eye out for the full one (hopefully) ;)
Cheers,
Wim |
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| JohnOC |
sounds dark as fcuk bren, like it - epic and gothic. massive potential for a dark anthem!
Cyan dawn 2005 please!!!!
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| activa |
| quote: | Originally posted by Bren-F
They are from a rather nifty (and large ) Akai classic choir multisample pack I have ;) |
Symphony of voices by any chance?:toothless ;) |
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| EternalMusic |
Very sweet track bren! I liked the piano alot.
The bass was abit to simple for my liking (not that its not pumpin or so), but other than that this one was great!
I have to agree with TOR and Wim on the technical issues though.
Keep it up, good to see some new stuff from you :).
Antonio. |
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| Apyr0us |
Hi there!
nice sample you have there!
The percussion and kick/clap etc are very good imo! ( as you mentioned maybe a bit thin still, but i/m sure you'll fix that)
The bassline is a bit standard, but it works well in the song.
I like the choir and string, I feel the choir could use a little longer attack and release ( or reverb). fix these little things ( or not :) and you have a solid track!
Mark |
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| Blizzz |
| Amazing choir... man i wish i had those samples ;) |
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| thoughtlessjex |
Try to beef up that acid stab that plays throughout the intro; it's a little thin.
In fact, a lot of your sounds do with some beefing up in general. It's only a wip, though, so you've got plenty of time.
Finish this up. |
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| trancedfarmer |
| Downright ty. |
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| Bren-F |
| quote: | Originally posted by trancedfarmer
Downright ty. |
Cheers for your honesty....
Wanker |
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| Stino |
| i like the percussion but could be a bit thicker sounding, bit rougher and a bit more on the forground. I think that choir is to standard now, needs more stereo enhancemant, sounds to mono (something that happens when you use a sample). Melody cant really move me aswell, it all sounds a bit to empty so far, i would like to haer more stuff going on in those pads and choirs. I hope to hear a final version. |
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| The Drow |
Never ever ever put a choir with a pad when the pad is upper on the mix.
It sounds wrong.
Oh you'll get this remixed by me...
This is amazing.
I really like the melodies.
Bass should have more layers imo.
Open Air sucks near this thingy.
8/10
really awsome stuff |
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