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Bren-F - Beyond The Clouds
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| Bren-F |
Heres a sample of my latest work in progress:
Bren-F - Beyond The Clouds (V1 Sample) 112kbps
A few people have said that my last track 'Open Air' was a bit on the happy side :p
So I have decided to go fore something more on the depressing side for my latest venture :)
I'm aware that the percussion is a little thin at the moment and the track is in need of background niceties/fx ect to make it a little more interesting, but this is something I will fix later on as it is still early days :)
Any other thoughts/suggestions/critique are welcomed...
Let me know what you think !
Cheers :D
PS - Fundy, don't worry mate. I haven't forgotton our track - I'll try to get it sent across to ya tomorrow buddy. Don't worry, it's only 6 months since we started it..... :stongue: |
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| eulerfx |
- I like the fast hi-hats, maybe make them louder.
- Those synth stabs may have a little too much reeverb on them
- Choirs are good, but play with the LFO controls, so that the sound changes, at least in the beginning
- Guitar needs to be a bit more prominent.
- Bass souns pretty good, though I would cut it even lower. |
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| State of Matter |
Very simple, emotional, and cleanly produced. Top track.
Less and less people seem to be reviewing anything these days. Shame, this is great stuff. |
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| EtherealSL |
great track, i'm liking this a lot more than that happier tune
but i wouldn't call this depressing either. The bass, imo, actually sounds fine where it's at, that dirtiness of it gives the track a nice unique sound.
melody is nice and mellow, not too catchy, which isn't necessarily a bad thing because it's not some epic anthem. i wish you introduced your lead in the breakdown, as the breakdown doesn't offer much besides pads filtering in. |
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| Mane |
| great percusion (even if its only earlie stage :p), bassline is ok but maybe has a bit too many freq?? verygood pads, i like this a bit dark atmosphere :), great melodie i like the sound you use for it (you use vsts??) overall very solid track , keep it up :) |
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| staticblue |
>beautiful choirs/strings ;)
>beautiful instruments
>nice beat
>cleanly produced : +1
8,5/10 for the moment :)
wanna hear this finished ! |
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| MaRt |
| Absolutely wonderful. If you're looking for remixers, I'd love to have a stab at this beauty. :D |
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| .A.Y. |
this acid(?) sound at the start is nice
bassline is cool!
the clap is good but i think you should make him stronger
the choir & the strings are great!
it sounds like almost everything is a little bit too much panned right, but maybe its just me?
anyway really cool track!
good job! |
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| alexpea |
| I don't like the bassline nor the sound of it. The pads are great though :D Nice and chill tune. |
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| TOR |
definitely a melody i like more than Open Air :D
lovely choirs, though i feel they conflict with the pads a bit. they need to be more seperated from each other and should cover more stereo space.
there are a few other issues too, but since this is only a sample, i'm sure you'll sort it out for the final version.
lots of potential in this one. |
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| Klangzentrum |
hey, bren!
again some great work from you!
bassline could use a lil less cutoff, imo! would sound a bit deeper...
choir is fine! great melody of pads!
some nice plucked chors as well!
kick is kewl btw!
percs have a basic structure but sound great...
hopefully we hear the full version soon! ;) |
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| RaverBabySy |
| Usual high standard of production, very clean. Personally I prefer the happy stuff but this is ok. Looking forward to hearing the finished piece. |
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